New Song let's see if you get the ending

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BENZOFOG
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2011/09/03 10:29:16 (permalink)

New Song let's see if you get the ending

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    Basradaem
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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/03 12:11:41 (permalink)
    The song fell off the edge?  .  Awesome tune, Dan!  But IMO the ending is just too abrupt.  I still enjoyed this, however!

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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/03 17:26:28 (permalink)
    That's what I was gonna say...someone or something fell off the edge?  Good song!  :)

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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/03 17:37:33 (permalink)
    Nice song Dan. It's been a while since I listened to any metal. It's interesting though, the music seemed to say screamo to me, but you kept it clean without losing the songs feel. Great job.
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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/03 19:54:23 (permalink)
    Wow once again thanks guys for your opinions i appreciate them alot the song if you understood the lyrics the guy is being pushed to the limit and he's saying if you dont stop im going to jump!!! so I thot i would do something totally different and end it like he just said forget and he jumped!!!! LOL
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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/04 00:56:25 (permalink)
    Yeah, I got that. Though I might tend to agree with the poster that said it ended too early. You ended with "standing" when it might have been better to let it end with "standing on the", so the listener is expecting "edge" but never gets it. It works either way though.
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    Re:New Song let's see if you get the ending 2011/09/04 11:39:04 (permalink)
    Nice tune, Dan.  The track has a good feel to it, just right for this genre.  I don't mind abrupt endings, but (IMO) you picked the wrong spot to do it.  Other than that I really liked this tune.  The only crit would be that there are a couple of points where the held note on the word "go" get a bit pitchy and drift a bit.  Easily fixed with VVocal or something similar.

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