New Tune - Looking for Some Input

Wow,  I have not posted in a loooooong time around these parts.  I've been perusing these boards again of late to keep a close eye on the unrolling of X1.  In the meantime,  I've completed a new track from a bunch I'm working on.  I've been having issues with my room,  and my mixes are not translating well.  I get a great sound at home through my monitors,  and I feel that my headphones sound good too.  However,  I go to a friend's house who has the exact same monitors,  and suddenly it is WAAAY too bass heavy and muddy.  And he says it's the same in HIS headphones.  (I'm not trying on his earbuds,  that's icky).

Anyhow,  this is an instrumental piece that starts out very quiet and bluesy/clean.  At the end though it kicks in with a full band mix.  Especially on this part I would like to get feedback.  Too much bass?  Too thin?  Is there a particular problem area you hear?  I think it sounds very balanced on my end,  so when you reply if you could give me a tiny breakdown of what you listen through and what your room is like.  (are you in a closet,  or a full sized room?  Are your mixes generally well balanced on different speakers?)

Playing to a Deaf Room

hmm,  there's no way you could miss those drums.  Are you talking about at 2:32 when the whole thing kicks in?  The drums are as in your face as I can get... :(

Thank you for listening and giving feedback.

The intro/slow part drags on a bit,  so I think a lot of people are only hearing 30 seconds and missing the actual part with the bass/drums/heavy guitars/Symphony part.

Thank you for listening also.  Ive begun re-working the mix we found bass heavy using this one as a reference point.  I think I'm getting much clearer sounds now,  but I need to rely heavily on headphones to do it.  I need to treat my room,  because now that I know where the problem is the difference is exaggerated that much more when I take my headphones off.

Just for the record I made a point of listening to the whole thing.
 
Yes the "drums" are in your face but not with any definition, to my ears it sounds as if their space is occupied by other instruments.  They become lost in the maelstrom of sound.  It felt like the was no LPF on the bass, no HPF on the other instrument so the bass could breath, no little notch on the bass for the kick slap everything was sort of piled on top of everything else. 
 
This is of course just my opinion and is totally subjective, I rarely comment on mixes for this very reason and because I do not consider myself to be so qualified.

Ioannis : You are correct comparison was not the intent and I agree that there is a big big difference between mixing synths and live instruments, synths tend not to suffer from artistic temperament, they are just temperamental. .  Thank you for the compliment on the my mixes.
 
There is probably a real good tune in this song it just needs a little more time in the mix.

Giankap:  Thank you very much.  I got started today by pulling the desk and speakers back from the wall,  and moving it away from the corner.  I moved the speakers a bit to obtain a proper triangle at the listening position. 

Tomorrow I am going to be filling the speakers stands I built with sand,  to help decrease what gets transmitted to the floor.

Next up will be getting some traps in those corners,  and some foam on the walls.  I have one wall with the air intake in the corner,  so I will not be able to put a trap there.  Is there any other way to go about this without blocking the air intake?

This is a great mix of a wide range of instruments...nice build...I waiting for drums right now.......................................taping the . in tempo ..........................ride  cymbal zylophone...........piano.........guitar..........who, distorted guitar.............................I'm waiting for thunder drums......................theyve got to be coming, i want it..................................hold it...............strings.....................................................just a light kick, I want my thunder drums......well, they never came but I like the track very much!