New monitor speakers - mix

HI folks.
I have a new set of Focal monitors and I have mixed one of the cake walk demo tracks.
If some of you have time could you give some feedback on this mix.
http://www.cakewalkowners.com/gary_mix.wav
Just wondered how it translates on other systems.
 
Thanks in advance.

Gary

Sounds totally pro here. I listening through regular medium sized speakers.

Wookiee
Are you enjoying the new monitors Gary? I think you did quite a good job on this having a go at mixed this myself.

Mix translates well here Gary.

Thanks Wookie.
I have the Focal Trio B6 monitors and SE Egg 150.
I mixed this without the subwoofer (Presonus)


The Trio Monitors are a large upgrade from the Eggs.
The more you get into this mixing stuff...  I think the better your ears get!!
I am 54 and think I am loosing a bit of the speech range and learning to compensate for that...   but it takes time.  :-)
 
I have been experimenting with Adaptiiverb and added it to the Acoustic guitar...  gives a little synth effect to it.
Also using Altiverb to add that little extra on the final mix.

I find reverb the hardest part to get right...  its so easy to over do!

sounds great here - tight in all the right areas

The mix and sounds are good on my Yamaha monitors.
Enjoyable song too.

Thank you for the comments.
 

Sounds fine on my Genelecs. Even sounds fine on Apple earbuds with the iPad eq off (which is how I keep it). A little different of course, but fine. Though the bass level may be a bit much if any of the bass-boosting or “smile” eqs that plague phones and tablets is in use.

I wouldn’t alter the mix though, people in the habit of always cranking the bass expect everything to be wallowing in low frequencies, so as far as they’re concerned it’ll still sound “normal”.