New song - How Do You Sleep

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groveendroad
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2011/03/03 10:10:58 (permalink)

New song - How Do You Sleep

New song: How Do You Sleep
Don't you wonder how some of the people on Wall street sleep, or drug Pusher, and bad cops?
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7536193
 
 
Cheers, Terry
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    Kroneborge
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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/03 10:21:35 (permalink)
    I slept just fine as a drug dealer thank you.  In fact it bothered me no more than working for a wine company does now (they are both drugs).

    Song wise,  the vocal seemed to be a bit nasally in some places.  Also, I would have liked a bit more low end.  The breakdown around 1:55 the timing seemed a bit off on the drums

    Finally I might cut down on some of the reverb just a tad.

    Thanks,




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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/03 12:36:07 (permalink)
    Neat song and good production Terry!  During the solo section if you turn down the piano and turn up the guitar and drop a little reverb I think it would be a little clearer.  The piano and the lead seem to fight each other right after that as well...maybe keep the piano down while the guitar is doing its thing. 

    Nice job

    PS--by "bad cops" do you mean crooked cops?  Or like...cops that read recording magazines in the cruiser instead of running radar for speeders? 


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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/03 22:18:11 (permalink)
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    Neat song and good production Terry!  During the solo section if you turn down the piano and turn up the guitar and drop a little reverb I think it would be a little clearer.  The piano and the lead seem to fight each other right after that as well...maybe keep the piano down while the guitar is doing its thing. 

    Nice job

    PS--by "bad cops" do you mean crooked cops?  Or like...cops that read recording magazines in the cruiser instead of running radar for speeders? 
     
    Mike, Thank you for listening and helping out. I will be working on it again in the morning.
     
    As for the law thing in my song, I just mean some one that is in law and thinks the law does not apply to them. It doesn't have to be a cop.
     
    Terry
     


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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/03 22:21:00 (permalink)
    Kroneborge


    I slept just fine as a drug dealer thank you.  In fact it bothered me no more than working for a wine company does now (they are both drugs).

    Song wise,  the vocal seemed to be a bit nasally in some places.  Also, I would have liked a bit more low end.  The breakdown around 1:55 the timing seemed a bit off on the drums

    Finally I might cut down on some of the reverb just a tad.

    Thanks,
     
    Thanks for listening, and for your input. I have to be more careful with that vocal thing.
     
     
    Terry


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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/04 10:14:56 (permalink)
    LpMike75


    Neat song and good production Terry!  During the solo section if you turn down the piano and turn up the guitar and drop a little reverb I think it would be a little clearer.  The piano and the lead seem to fight each other right after that as well...maybe keep the piano down while the guitar is doing its thing. 

    Nice job

    PS--by "bad cops" do you mean crooked cops?  Or like...cops that read recording magazines in the cruiser instead of running radar for speeders? 
     
    Mike, here is "how do you sleep" with the changes you thought it needed
     
    http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_7551383
     
    thanks, Terry


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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/04 10:32:53 (permalink)
    Kroneborge


    I slept just fine as a drug dealer thank you.   

    Hence the reason why you currently "reside" in Lompoc!
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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/06 00:05:03 (permalink)
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    Kroneborge


    I slept just fine as a drug dealer thank you.   

    Hence the reason why you currently "reside" in Lompoc!
     
    The pride of a drug pusher, good to know they can sleep. I knew that they could. I know you're JK. LOL

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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/06 00:19:36 (permalink)
    Nice song, Terry.  I like the remix even more.
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    Re:New song - How Do You Sleep 2011/03/06 00:28:03 (permalink)
    gist


    Nice song, Terry.  I like the remix even more.
     
    thanks Gist, I am catching two more things i have to fix. It never ends, does it?
     
    cheers, terry

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