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2014/08/04 13:41:47 (permalink)

New song - Let You Go - (updated 8/18/14)

Hello to all my forum friends.  I've been vacationing until recently which is why I haven't been around.  I was inspired to write this new song about two weeks ago, and now it's ready for your perusal.  I've changed my production methods drastically since my last song, and this is the result.  As usual, I wrote and recorded everything, and I  eagerly await your thoughts.  All I've learned from this forum has been applied to this production.  I want to thank all of you in advance for your time and effort regarding this and all past productions.  I couldn't have done it without your help.
 
8/18/14- Here is the result of my remix per your suggestions.  I added more "beef" to the low end and balanced the left and right channels.  Hope this works.
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post edited by Lynn - 2014/08/18 10:46:31

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/04 20:20:54 (permalink)
I don't know what the deal is with Soundclick but I had to find your page, before I noticed the link in your sig, and click the download button to get it to play.
 
I love the groove. I especially like the way the left and right are playing off of each other and that cool bass line.
 
Maybe the snare could come up just db? The bass drum seems to thud out to me. The toms have more oomph than the bass drum but the toms sound fine. This is subjective but I like the drums from the listeners perspective rather than the drummers.  The section at 2:06 - 2:35 is really cpp;! Nice change.
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/05 18:31:03 (permalink)
Lynn,
 
Really good song and arrangement.   I can't decide whether I like the vocal processing or not, at first I didn't like it but by the end it was growing on me a little;)   I would be curious how it sounds clean, i.e. without the modulation or whatever is on the track.   The music is really engaging, very cool.
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/05 20:46:17 (permalink)
Man, I really like this one.  Actually, I like what you have done on the vocals on this number.  The FX gives the vocals just a hint of Z Z Top.  Your wide separation really highlights the great interplay between the left and right panning ---- cool!  You have done a great job on the arrangement --- very different and very cool!
Excellent song Lynn!!!
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/05 21:40:46 (permalink)
Thank you all for your kind remarks.
 
Robert, I'll take your observations about the drums into account when I revisit this.  This was the first song I ever did with AD2, so I'll take some time with this to get it right.
 
Mark, thanks for listening.  The vocal processing in this comes from Izotope Nectar, and it reminds me of a Pink Floyd song that I like.  I made sure that the dry vocal was sounding good to my ears before applying the f/x.
 
Freddy, thank you for your kind words.  I hadn't thought of ZZ Top, but now that you mention it, I know what you mean.  This f/x was new for me, and I just wanted to give it a try.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/06 10:46:06 (permalink)
Lynn you're always surprising me with a new style well done...very creative use of vocal effects and I think the bass carries it.The mix is clean I want to hear this later on my monitors. NICE!!!! WELL DONE!!!!!

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/06 11:32:28 (permalink)
Lynn, really like this. Different style. Stands out. Sounds great.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/07 19:02:38 (permalink)
Ditto on the drums. Fatten the snare and kick and bring them up a bit. You might want to add some modulation to the left synth that plays off the guitar so that its resonance varies a bit over time. It will add some motion to it.
 
Awesome work my friend!
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/08 09:55:01 (permalink)
Reminds me of early Genesis.  Like what you did with the panning.  Good big space in the middle for the vox.  I'm trying do more of that.  Like transition alot.  Awe sweet at 2:30...like that alot.  Guitar on right sounds alot like the guitar on "When Doves Cry"...like it.  I'd like a slightly fatter bass and kick.  Nice job.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/08 12:50:35 (permalink)
Guys, thanks for you helpful comments.
 
Tim, I hope it sounds good on your monitors.  I appreciate your time.
 
Chas, you've inspired me to consider making a video for this.  Thanks for your input.
 
Dan and Don, thank you both for your awesome comments.  It seems there's a growing consensus about the drums.  I can't wait to play with them again.
 
All these comments help me a great deal and encourage me.  Much grass!

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 12:04:31 (permalink)
I really like this one Lynn, as noted above it's different but really cool.
I like the vocal processing, fits the song well IMHO.
Great arrangement, good job on spacing everything.
What is that effect on the right channel guitar? Really cool.
Great job!

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 13:43:42 (permalink)
Steve Miller! :-) it has your signature sound Lynn. It's mixed up pretty loud, not sure how you do that and keep it clear and balanced. 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 14:49:39 (permalink)
Hi guys, thanks for the kind words and time.
 
Bob, the guitar is played through TH2 and the main f/x is the Octaver with a little grit.  I love that sound, and I first heard it done by Jimi Hendrix.
 
John, I keep my levels low in Sonar (about -12 to 18), bounce to Sound Forge, where I put a limiter on it set to -8.0 threshold and -0.1 margin for 16/44.1 wave files.  For MP3 conversion, I set the limiter to 0 threshold and -0.35 margin @256K.  Thanks for asking.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 15:29:03 (permalink)
nice song and arrangement.. sounds good


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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 20:28:46 (permalink)
this is a very interesting tune...really cool...very different. I really enjoyed this!!
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/09 22:02:23 (permalink)
I think you may have created a genre!!  I can't say I've ever heard anything like it (that's meant as a compliment btw).  I like the treatment on the vocals, it made me focus on them and the lyrics.  Very good job.
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/10 20:33:19 (permalink)
Makke, thanks for your time and kind words.  BTW, I enjoyed your odes to the circus!
 
Tom, thank you for your interest!  I'd like to hear what you could do with this.  I'll be in touch.
 
James, I'm not sure what genre this would fit in, but I call it progressive-pop, for lack of a better description.  Thanks for your time!

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/11 14:37:15 (permalink)
Nice to see you back song sounds basically good.
 
For me though the bass and the kick sound like they are lacking any body/weight and it is all a bit harsh and jangly.  This is just my furry ear pers-p-e-ctive. 
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/12 23:52:21 (permalink)
Hi Lynn ,
your song is pretty impressive in a lot of areas  
I like the way you changed up the arrangement at 2:06 and ongoing ..brilliant , yeah I like the way you did the vocals and there's a lot of cool playing going on with all the supporting parts .
it sounds like you are heading in a very creative direction with your new production methods .
 
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/13 16:47:45 (permalink)
Wookie, I'm very interested in the comments you made about the recording being  a bit harsh and jangly.  That's something I want to avoid, so I will take care to deal with those issues on the next pass.  Thanks for your comments and time!
 
Kenny, I'm so encouraged by your remarks and observations.  You're one of the best around, so it gives me hope for the future.  Thanks for taking the time.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/14 14:47:42 (permalink)
Cool song there, Lynn!   Different for sure.   I like the interplay between the left and right sides, and the vocals do remind me a little of ZZ too both in tone and processing.   Works well IMHO.
 
Oh...  and I love the short "pop-corn" solo.  
 

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/14 17:36:58 (permalink)
Steve, thanks for the listen and your kind words.  How about a little butter for your popcorn?

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/14 19:27:44 (permalink)
But(ter) of course.
 

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/14 20:28:14 (permalink)
Cool tune. Excellent production and playing. I like the vocal effect also. I think the tune needs a little low end boost to help fatten the kick and bass and help calm some of the high mids, in other words it needs more bottom,to me. Great
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/14 21:12:10 (permalink)
Monty, thank you for your observations.  You are not alone in your assessment.  I will address these concerns when I return to this mix.  Last weekend, Kansas City got a lot of rain, and my basement, where my studio resides, got flooded.  Fortunately, only my carpet got soaked, but I had to hire a water restoration company to clean and dry out my studio.  Tomorrow the fans and dehumidifier will go, and I can put my studio back together and get to work on this project.  Thanks for you valuable time.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/15 18:15:45 (permalink)
Lynne,
 
Are you using that full version of Nectar on this song, or Elements version?  Very cool vocal fx.  It does have a little of that "Little Ol' Band's" sound on vocals.  Needs just a little low end boost, as mentioned.....but great song.  I mucho like this one!

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/15 19:57:24 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby MakeShift 2014/08/17 09:20:54
Good job Lynn, this is right in your wheelhouse.

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/15 22:19:12 (permalink)
I dig it.  Wouldn't change anything.  Catchy tune.
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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/16 10:02:57 (permalink)
Nice remix Lynn, still got that edginess without the harsh jangle, we also have some bottom end weight and body.
 
Good job sir

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Re: New song - Let You Go 2014/08/16 13:33:33 (permalink)
Hi, Michael, thanks for listening and good to hear from you.  I have two versions of Nectar, one that came with Sound Forge 11, and another that came with something else.  I'm sure they're both the light versions, but I'm using one that is 64 bit and a VST3.  Probably the SF version?
 
Robbie, thank you for your time and kind words.  Best of luck with your new song which I think is a hit.
 
Pluto, thanks for your time and comments.  I enjoyed hearing the tunes you have posted here.
 
Wookie, you pointed me in the right direction, as you have done in the past, so, take credit where credit is due.  Thanks for being my ears.

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