New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel

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2017/09/30 03:53:05 (permalink)

New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel

Here is a song I wrote recently about the perils of illicit dalliance and leisurely reflection.
 
https://soundcloud.com/wal-pawlik/she-left-me-hurtin
 
Featuring Steve Bartel on vocals.
 

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    savoy
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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/09/30 12:26:28 (permalink)
    that's good dude!!congrat
     
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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/04 18:58:21 (permalink)
    Very cool mix. Thanks for sharing.
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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/04 22:36:19 (permalink)
    Guys, I appreciate the kind words.
     
    Cheers

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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/05 14:20:53 (permalink)
    Really well done track, all the way around. From an "what I like" perspective, I would have liked the harmonies on "...left me hurtin'..." to hang on between phrases and not exactly follow the lead vocal, but that's just me.
     
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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/05 18:35:50 (permalink)
    This song is very well written and performed, and what I like about it is that you didn't go for overkill in the production.  That being said, I struggled to hear the fine piano and bass parts.  Also, though the snare comes through, I couldn't hear the other drums as well.  This song is worth a remix and a remaster because I thought that the mix was a little low in volume.  This is a gem in waiting.

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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/06 05:52:12 (permalink)
    Dan, Thanks for your remarks. I know what you mean about the harmonies. At this stage they are a sort of "place holder", as I'm negotiating with a couple female backing singers to do the real thing.
     
    Lynn, I appreciate your comments, on reflection, it will be getting a remix, once I get the girls on.
     
    Cheers.

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    Re: New song. She Left Me Hurtin'. feat. Steve Bartel 2017/10/06 23:47:02 (permalink)
    You certainly have captured a neo-country sound and did a good job on the mixing.  Like Lynn I appreciate the fact that this is not "over produced."  I believe that this would have good commercial value.  I agree with the comments about harmonies or BGV's but it also stands on its own with out them.
     
    Nice one!
     
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