New song - Space (post-rock/shoegaze)

this is great. reminds me of Muse meets A Perfect Circle. dig the 6/8 time sig. like the lulls at 1:29/2:27/5:26 & break at 4:29


...something i would buy and listen to :)

I love this song, but I'm not crazy about the mix.  It needs more cowbell!  Seriously, I couldn't hear your voice under the wall of guitar sound, but if that's how you like it then I'm satisfied.  This could be something that I'd buy, too, once you tweak it a time or two.

I am not sure if the voice is suppose to be like an instrument and not really heard above it, like more background I guess. I wonder about the drums though, as sometimes those get carried away. So I am not sure about the mix then either for the drums stand out perhaps a bit too much. Different though, and I guess the title is appropriate - for it is and sounds like "Space". I will have to agree and disagree with the others, for I can not really comment about the song except to say that it is like "Space".

With my feet firmly in the post-rock ShoeGaze lovers circle... Mig, this is damn near perfect.  It has elements of the Jesus and Marychain (my FAV ShoeGaze), Smashing Pumpkins and newer versions of the same.  There was some Cure type guitar happening, too.  Nice.

The change-ups are just fabulous.  The fuzz guitar is perfect... There is one point where I heard a clean high pitched guitar tone, and it worried me for a millisecond, until I realized it was just a move to a different section and it really worked. 

The lyrics are great, the vocals are subdued and melancholy and introspective... Perfect.  I'm bookmarking it.  Would totally buy it.

Nice tune. Took a lttle getting used to lyrics being intentionally buried, but i can dig that too. Great writing and guitar work. The drums are quite "Pumpkiny." Good stuff!

I really liked the music but couldn't hear any lyrics at all.  I'm on good monitors so, maybe it's just me.  I like the tune.

@All
I've updated the mix.
http://soundcloud.com/theauralith/severed-vesper-space-1 
The issues pointed out have been tweaked, but i won't tell what i did so that any psychological factors with knowing what changed won't occur. Thank you again!

@Warren
Thanks so much! Although, like i said, the lyrics are intended not to be understood properly.

@Julie
Ohh, this seems cool! I'm trying to find a couple more songs of theirs to absorb them better.

Ok, now that I'm over the initial "I love this song" phase... You COULD pull the vox up a bit. I dont mean a lot.  Just a bit.  May be an automation thing... Sometimes it's ok, sometimes too far back.  It would probably mean carving out some space in the wall of guitars, but ok.  The other thing... In the guitar solo... It's getting a little lost in the verb. and it's a good solo... So, yeah, I agree with mgh, here. At 3:05... I'm not sure I DISlike the slightly off tune vox, but it keeps sticking out at me... Not blending... I don't always hear that stuff in my own mixes, so I'm pointing it out.  


Every time those guitars slam in.... It's Awesome.

YEP.  :)