New song from me

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2005/04/12 23:58:01 (permalink)

New song from me

Heres my latest its called contract negotiations. To me the its a little bassy and the lead needs to come up a bit......would like your opinions.


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    CRJ700
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 00:03:41 (permalink)
    Sorry forgot link.......
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/jerryfradenburgmusic.htm
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 10:27:10 (permalink)
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 15:21:00 (permalink)
    Hey man YOU ROCK! (that's me in the corner pumping my devil horn sign fist in the air and banging my head)

    Seriously, great guitar work, you've got a ton of chops. Only criticism (if you could even call it that) is that it is less a song and more of an extended solo - nothing wrong with that, by the way ... not everything recorded has to fit into the mold of a 3-4 minute pop tune (although everthing I do somehow winds up in the mold).

    Keep cranking them out (wish I could play guitar like u).


    Listen to my music at
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 15:49:37 (permalink)
    I liked it.
    You got chops for shure. My only problem was the snare was hard left and the rest of the kit I couldent hear.
    very good work however
    joe
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 16:14:18 (permalink)
    Jerry,
    That's some hot playing there. I think having some vocals on that would complete the picture.
    I liked the light guirtar part that was on the beginning up to 0:23, would have liked to hear that fit in again later.
    As kids suggests the drums could use some work.
    The "chorus" is really catchy (the part first introduced at 0:51)



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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 18:23:02 (permalink)
    I agree, lead needs to come up. Nice work though.
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/13 20:44:28 (permalink)
    Hey guys i remixed it per your advice and brought lead up a little as far as drums go i have no idea why they are hard left and i cant do much about it now. The problem is is that it sounds good on my soundcard and speaker setup the hard part is making it so it sounds good on all setups. Do me a favor and listen to it again its been remixed somewhat and let me know how it is now.

    Thanks for the nice comments guys

    JERRY
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    RE: New song from me 2005/04/14 10:29:40 (permalink)
    I just checked your download site and didn't see the new MP3.
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