New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique

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2013/02/10 23:11:16 (permalink)

New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique


Hey, I'd appreciate some feedback or critiques for a new song I just uploaded today. Appropriately enough for Valentine's Day, it's titled "X's and O's."
Thanks.

http://www.reverbnation.c...ong/16188845-xs-and-os

Mark


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    guitardood
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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 00:53:17 (permalink)
    Nice track Mark.


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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 00:56:18 (permalink)
    Very pleasing and professional sounding mix! Sounds great on headphones anyway, too late for speakers 

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 08:14:21 (permalink)
    Sounds great here too!

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 10:37:59 (permalink)
    Nice song Mark, reminds me of Poco. Good to hear a love song with some original lyrics too.

     
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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 11:13:52 (permalink)
    This is a nice, positive and uplifting song.  The mix is clear and well balanced on my speakers.  You have a good voice for this type of material.  Bravo.

    All the best,
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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/11 15:25:57 (permalink)
    Nice job - if you ever need any Christian keyboard tracks, give me a holler (PM).

    I also write Christian tunes - will post when I finish the one I am working on.

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/12 13:50:43 (permalink)
    Thanks everyone for the great feedback, and for listening.

    JamesG: Poco is not a name I have heard in a long while. I know they had some hits, so if it sounds like someone who had a hit ... I'm take that as a complement. Thank you.

    Bob Bone: I would love to hear some of your work, and yes, I might just take you up on that keyboard track offer. There is a song I was toying with piano on, and just couldn't make it work right. In fact, it's up on my Reverbnation site, where this "X's and O's" song is posted. The song is call "Forever."

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/12 18:28:31 (permalink)
    mwall, sounds very good. Enjoyed the listen.

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/13 00:20:09 (permalink)
    Yep, sounded pretty good, performance was also pretty tight. A song to be proud of for sure.

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/13 12:26:42 (permalink)
    Thanks, foxwolfen!

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/13 12:31:28 (permalink)
    Nice track! Great singing.

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    Re:New song - just in time for Valentine's Day - for feedback/critique 2013/02/23 11:07:01 (permalink)
    Thanks, vechung. I appreciate you listening.

    Mark
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