New song: "I'm Standing At The End Of The World"

This song was inspired by an Interview that was read with Tom Petty about George Harrison and him, in Rolling Stone. Tom ended up not using a a line "I'm standing On The Edge Of the World" due to advise from George Harrison.
 
This is a part of the interview:
 
 
"I Won't Back Down," on "Full Moon Fever," is more like a mantra than a song. That put me off when I wrote it. It's so bare, without any ambiguity. There was nothing there but truth. There was another issue going on, though. Someone had tried to kill me, with the arson at my house. [In 1987, someone set fire to Petty's home in Encino, California.] I took that personally. Surviving something like that makes you feel alive.
That was my mind-set: I will survive, I will move on. It blurted out of my mouth. I changed one thing. There was a line I was singing, "I'm standing on the edge of the world." When we cut the record, George Harrison was there. He played and sang on that track. And he goes, "Tom, what the **** is it with 'standing on the edge of the world'?" I was like, "Oh, busted."By a Beatle, too. I went, "Yeah, you're right. That doesn't mean anything." I thought for a minute and went, "How about, 'There ain't no easy way out?'" George went, "Much better."          
Check out  "I'm standing At The Edge Of The World @ http://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat     
 
Cheers, Terry     

Good call out guitarhacker and RimShot. I think i got it right now.
Please let me know.
http://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat

Thanks GuitarHacker, I think I may have it now. http://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat     
 
I put the newest fix at the top on the player
 
Terry

Vox sound too compressed to me.
 
Actually the whole song sounds like it was recorded in dolby and the dollby was turned off for the mixdown.
 
Muddy and pumping are the words that comes to mind.

Thanks guitarhacker. I changed the pad to get less reverb as well, but i'm taking that it's still to much

I must have heard the "new and improved" version because this works for me.  You have one of the most unique and recognizable voices on this forum, and you continue to use it well.  This is good songwriting, and you apparently have taken and used suggestions very well.  Rock on!

This song sounds really good to me.  I love the ultra-dirty synth, spacy piano and organ, the laid back pop vibe, and the vocals work well too.
 
One small rhythmic nitpick - seems like there's a slight hitch in the drums a few times, at 0:14, 1:16, and 2:32.  Sounds like a possible quantize error.