New song- "The Bitter End"

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The Metal One
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2014/10/28 00:50:09 (permalink)

New song- "The Bitter End"

Hey guys.
Just finished my newest project; figured I'd share...
 
youtube.com/watch?v=Uz-nJycg8jw
 
Compliments and criticisms are welcome, of course. I'm trying to build up a following on YouTube (which is tough). So, anyone who likes it please subscribe to my channel and/or share the video with someone who might enjoy it. I can use all the support and exposure I can get. Thank you, my shameless self-promotion is done hahaha.
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    kakku
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    Re: New song- "The Bitter End" 2014/10/28 09:58:57 (permalink)
    Very good rhythm guitar work. Vocals need a bit more work imo compared to the instruments. Drums could be louder, especially cymbals. Solo guitar was very nice. This needs a bass guitar or perhaps you could lay down some bass lines for example with the SI bass guitar vst. Minor niggle was that it was a bit long.
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    post edited by kakku - 2014/10/28 10:55:26
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    Re: New song- "The Bitter End" 2014/10/28 18:52:04 (permalink)
    thank you for the feedback. a couple of those problems were caused by youtube. I don't know what it is, but the audio is missing some adjustments that I made (panning for example) which would have made the finished product sound a little better.
     
    I'm glad you found some things to like about it.
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    Re: New song- "The Bitter End" 2014/11/01 19:22:32 (permalink)
    I forgot to say that I liked this much more than the first one I heard from you. So you are definitely on the right track.
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    Re: New song- "The Bitter End" 2014/11/02 05:49:41 (permalink)
    kakku
    I forgot to say that I liked this much more than the first one I heard from you. So you are definitely on the right track.
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    Thank you very much for adding that. I've been feeling kinda crappy about it, due to some mixed reactions to my singing. I appreciate the compliment.
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