One more song

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2008/05/22 14:02:22 (permalink)

One more song

This song started as a joke during band practice when my band was still together... Next thing you know our lead singer started singing the same lyrics to it every time and we ended up recording it.

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    Guitarhacker
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    RE: Onr more song 2008/05/22 14:44:36 (permalink)
    Interesting....I kinda like the chorus better. There is a huge jump between the two step sounding verses and the heavy rocking chorus.

    I'd look at making it more cohesive. Choose one or the other style. They two styles are not close enough IMO to make this work well.

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    RE: Onr more song 2008/05/22 14:59:28 (permalink)
    The big differenec is actually what we were after. Thanks for listening.
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    RE: Onr more song 2008/05/22 16:12:08 (permalink)
    Thats a cool hopping tune. Enjoyable.

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    RE: Onr more song 2008/05/22 16:27:27 (permalink)
    thanks
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    RE: One more song 2008/05/22 18:12:50 (permalink)
    I like the contrast. Maybe the snare is a bit to dominant during the chorusses . Other than that: Sounds very good.

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    RE: One more song 2008/05/22 21:27:26 (permalink)
    Roberto

    I can see the need for the major change between the chorus etc. I think it fits well.

    Nice little story and an all around fun song.

    Well done

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    RE: One more song 2008/05/23 07:46:37 (permalink)
    Thanks
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    RE: One more song 2008/05/23 08:37:19 (permalink)
    Fun tune, it definitely sounds like you enjoyed making the song. Lyrics develop the story well. Vocals seem a little buried in the mix, snare/drums are quite forward. The mix sounds a little, um .. clumpy in the middle. Each individual part is good on its own but the parts seem a little out of balance with each other. This has the makings of a commercial song, a nice hook in the chorus, a story about humanity, and a fun attitude.
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    RE: One more song 2008/05/23 11:15:23 (permalink)
    Really nice tune. Loved the movement. The mix could be a bit better but overall it's cool.
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    RE: One more song 2008/05/23 11:43:31 (permalink)
    The download kept haning up on me for some reason.

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