One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes

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2014/05/22 11:12:21 (permalink)

One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes

She writes and sings all the songs in her band. This song is going to be mixed one more time and then mastered. She needed to present an MP3 to someone in order to get booked at a festival, which they did... I hope she is on the way up.
This one sounds a lot better than the first mix. IMO, the guitar sounds a little over compressed and the bass needs to be louder and more full. I hinted to her to make sure the producer does not over compress everything, for her to Google "the loudness wars" and by sure that they leave some dynamics, anyway... she and I would like to know if you hear anything that is a glaring error. It was recorded at Rock or Die studios in Germany.
https://soundcloud.com/thewaynes
 
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I'll post more songs hen I get them, she said that this isn't her favorite but is the one most ready at this point.
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    Re: One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes 2014/05/22 11:36:09 (permalink)
    Hi Julien,
     
    To me it doesn't sound like the guitars...it's the whole mix being a bit over comped. The guitar solo may sound over-compressed to you. That's actually his sound...that old 60's tone. We call that "the starved plate sound" which means the tubes are saturating heavily there to the point of sounding "choked" off. The compression I'm hearing on the whole song, affects the snare drum pretty bad. It loses snap when all the instruments are playing in full. When the instruments back down, you'll notice you hear the snare a bit more relaxed. This is the first sign of limiter over-use. The first thing to change in an over-limiting situation is the instrument with the hardest transient...which of course is the snare. I don't hear any pumping or breathing within the mix though.
     
    That said, I sincerely don't think any of this is bad....but it would sound better a little less compressed. Then again, this is the format for today's music as much as you or me may be against it. At the end of the day, if this is being shopped to a major label or may have possible airplay, it's a fine representation of the band. In a world where people are accepting lesser quality material and over-compression, I wouldn't worry about it as I've heard 100 x worse that was still acceptable. When something totally sounds like @ss to where it makes you cringe or throw up in your mouth, THEN you worry. But I'd not let this one get to you. It's the sound of 2014. Hope this helps.
     
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    Re: One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes 2014/05/22 12:56:15 (permalink)
    Thanks Danny! I guess I am a little lot OCD about a lot of things... I need to relax, lol
     
    I really appreciate your thoughts and I'm sure Becky will. She is a good kid.
     
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    Re: One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes 2014/05/22 18:15:35 (permalink)
    Sounds pretty good to me! Maybe a little over compressed but that is how most music is being done these days. I listened on headphones and it had plenty of bass, sounded good!

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    Re: One of my daughter's songs.. The Waynes 2014/05/22 20:09:42 (permalink)
    Thanks teego !!
     
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