Pedal Faster -UPDATED link to reflect new mix and master

Very beautiful piece! I love it. I'm not sure I like what LANDR did to it though. The guitar overtakes the vocals a bit. Did you LANDR each track individually, or the final mix? Just curious. I've never used it, though I've looked at it.

I'd actually just push the guitar back a bit and leave the vocal the way it is. Otherwise the balance with your other instrumentation will start getting out of whack.
 
Nice "air" on your voice, which is quite nice.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Welcome to the songs forum.
 
Nice gentle tune, mix works reasonable here, as noted perhaps back off the guitar a tad, thanks for sharing.

Lovely guitar work. I'm with them: back the guitar off a little. Terrific change at 2:20 or so.Could the vocal use a treble boost?  That might just be my ears.

Great stuff here
LJ ,
There are a lot of things in your song that I am very fond of ...
The first one is while I am listening to your song it actually brings me someplace other than where I am
You know , I'm sitting here in my dining room and once I start listening to your tune I feel as if I'm in another location 
I feel like I can daydream and pretend that I'm in Paris , Italy or any other number of places I've only seen in a travel brochure .
The song itself has a very theatrical quality to it ...my impression is you may have had a background or have listened very deeply to some of the classic music that has come from the theatrical stage / musical genre .
I'm supposed to be some kind of guitar player around here and yet I wish I could get my acoustic guitar to sound even close or half as good to the lovely sound of yours ....
BTW , I agree with others , the acoustic may need to come down in the track to give your voice more clarity in the mix  .
 
Your Voice has a very soothing Angelic quality to it once it draws me in I want to hear more ...
 
This song is very nice Music .
 
Oh before I forget , Welcome to the Song  Forum
 
all the best to you  ,
 
Kenny

It does sound smoother here, did you bring up the cello?  as I said on soundcloud Nice

Kenny, I can't thank you enough for the kindness in what you wrote and for being so considerate and thoughtful in your comments.
Wookiee, thank you for my very first Soundcloud comment ever :). Yes, I changed the tone of the cello slightly and added a tiny bit of reverb.
jamesg1213, I appreciate that very much. I'd give a lot to be thought of as "refreshing" more often! :)

 
What a generous bunch you are - all so talented and still taking the trouble to be encouraging to a newcomer - thank you!
 

Thank you for the kind words, Mr.1968 :)

Thank you so much for those kind words, stevec!
 
Edit to add: Those dissonant lines really make me happy (or actually, sad), though I do say so myself. Thanks for saying that!

It's the female 6th Beatle!  I'm digging this style of yours.  This seriously has that White Album feel to me.  You have a very original vision.  Nicely played...

All I can say is that I'm very surprised and grateful for such wonderful, kind words. I never expected anything like this. Thank you very much, ABull (Allan :))  and Voda La Void.

Thanks very much, synkotron :)
LJ