Piano Instrumental - "Oh February"

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Piano Instrumental - "Oh February"

Here's a song I wrote a while back and re-tracked after upgrading my piano environment.  It's a slower piece that I'm kind of looking to add either a Cello or a Flute (No midi or sampled instruments).
 
Any unique suggestions or ideas or comments would be greatly helpful.
 
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/16 23:51:52 (permalink)
    I've been busy remixing a bunch of songs lately so this thing slipped down the page awhile before I saw it.  I'm glad I finally did.  It's beautiful, as I expected.  Very very nice.  I can't wait to hear it with a cello or flute (or both).  How nice to have real ones available. :-)  I like the 'big' section in the middle--nice contrast. 

    I'm guessing you're playing a real piano and mic'ing it?  Whatever--it's gorgeous!!
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 08:32:37 (permalink)
    Very beautiful. I can't wait to hear the flute!

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 10:08:39 (permalink)
    From "Dissection Black Metal" last song I listened to this.  Man It's like hitting a wall!!  Janet has graced us with her piano excellence for a long time and you, my friend, are treating us now.  I will be a baby and say the beauty of this tune has me with a tear in my eye!  THANKS!!!  If someone asked me what is a good moment for me in my life I would say listening to a beautiful piece like this. 

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 12:25:32 (permalink)

       Sounds great as is. An upright bass and jazz drums
    would sound great with this too. or
        
         Classical guitar
         Acoustic guitar
        sax
        Brass section    Think of "blood sweat and tears")
        female voc background fills 
        upright bass without drums.
     
         Any one or combination of the above is about all I
    can think of if your looking for thoughts on instrumentation.
    It carries itself well as is too so either way its a great piece.

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 13:25:33 (permalink)
    Sounds great!

    I'm adding muted trumpet to Jimmys list for possible extra instruments.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 19:50:56 (permalink)
    Thanks Janet. 

    I always enjoy a good piano number and I've enjoyed many of your wonderful piano songs on here the last couple years......yeah, at first I was kinda wondering if that contrast in the middle might be too much....but i think it worked out ok....glad to hear you liked it....
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/17 19:56:15 (permalink)
    So...you did play this live, right?  

    If so, you're outta my league.  But I'm glad you enjoy some of mine anyway. :-)  
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2009/10/19 12:03:04 (permalink)
    Kringle - Thanks for the listen.  Very interesting flutes that you make - they sound really nice.

    Warren - Yeah - that's a major transition after listening to the metal.  Thanks for the great comments.....glad you enjoyed it.
     
    Jimmy - Those are great options for me to think about.  I've got a future one I'm working on which that idea of an upright and jazz drums sounds like an appealing idea.

    Mountainman - That muted trumpet idea is also good.  Seems like I'm getting good ideas for the future.  Thanks.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/26 14:37:03 (permalink)
    jayhill...
    I always try to listen to, and comment on music by those people that do the same for me... thanks... 
     
    I had to go back to 2009 to find this one...
    I have to say, I'm glad I did... I love your music... you are a great player, and this production is lovely...  more please...
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/26 15:51:34 (permalink)
    Superb!  I'm sure whatever you add to this will enhance it because it can stand on its own.

    All the best,
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/26 16:24:37 (permalink)
    ^ I totally agree with Lynn - anything added to this piece will probably be just icing on the cake.

    Nothing else I can say unless you want a complete harmonic analysis. I can't help doing that even mentally, when listening to music. I can tell you that the piece is in Ab - the V7 (Eb7) and colorings told me!

    With the piano only, I can see this serving as background music for a film or scene in a film. It also sound like a great piece for a soloist if you ever decide to put lyrics with it.

    It's calm, peace and relaxing. I hope the enhancing is done well so it doesn't take away from it as the piano seems to be the focal instrument. I do hope you don't fall into that "getting it to sit in the mix" trap.

    Wonderful job.

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/26 16:36:10 (permalink)
    I agree with Frank, commenting is a compliment whenever it's done.  I looked back a couple pages after you commented on our song.  Not far enough I guess.  My comments stand from 3 years ago except I have no metal on my mind this time.  So beautiful, this needed to be heard again.  I thank Frank for digging farther.  I thank you for a beautiful performance.

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/27 09:01:36 (permalink)
    The piano is such a beautiful instrument by itself.   I think this composition stands on its own quite well. 

    Nice dynamics and expression in the playing..... hearing this kind of playing makes me regret not sticking with piano when I started learning guitar, but the guitar was such a sexy instrument and much easier to carry around. My piano teacher was always preaching dynamics and expression to me.... 


    well done. 

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/27 09:40:33 (permalink)
    The piano was beautifully recorded! I love to hear when it is real. It can stay where it is now because it is lovely. But you can try what you said a Cello or Flute. Or maybe some jazz bass and a drum on brushes.

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/27 11:05:49 (permalink)
    WONDERFUL performance/piece.  I agree with Jimmy a Jazz piece with a Upright bass and a brush drum kit.  KUDOS!


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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/27 20:18:58 (permalink)
    notnat - I was surprised to see this one up on the forum again.  I thought it got lost in the archives for good.  Thanks for taking a listen...and yes, I hope to post more of these in the future.
     
    Lynn - It was my hope at one time for a Cello on this, but those Cello guys are hard to find.  Thanks for the listen and good to know/reinforce that it can stand by itself.
     
    Rus - I think you nailed that coloring on this.  A harmonic analysis or chording someday would be cool if I give this off to someone for additional tracking.  Thanks.
     
    Warren - Yes, my first reaction scanning down the songs page was... Someone else wrote a song named "Oh February"?...what a coincidence.  Took me a few seconds to realize.
     
    Guitarhacker - My piano teacher (mom) was preaching the same things to me as a little kid.  And she was hard to avoid in the evenings when I didn't want to practice.  lol.  It's funny, but I hear all this good guitar on this forum and it sometimes makes me wish I would have taken up the guitar. 
    post edited by jayhill - 2012/09/27 20:29:20
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/27 20:42:07 (permalink)
    ^ You're welcome! I love coloring and I did do the crayon kind as a child. It's bled into my music since then Not to mention, I try to stay inside the lines (hear that jsaras).

    I could give you one now if you'd like, but as I told another user, I could be wrong as it'll only be an aural interpretation. I'm being facetious unless you really want that. Having said that, an analysis probably isn't important at this point nor is it really needed. I threw that in there as a "joke."

    However, I am serious about the coloring (Notice my name on the forum in the link in my signature. That is not a coincidence!)

    Looking forward to hearing other works of yours. 
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/29 22:49:20 (permalink)
    Vicente - Thank you for listening and your comments. It's a pleasure to try differnet micing positions when recording the grand piano...so many different possibilities.  I like your jazz guitar works.
     
     
    Kev - A pleasure to hear your comments. Yes, Jimmy would have liked the brushes and upright; I'll have to see what I can do.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/09/29 22:56:44 (permalink)
    Beautiful... One of my greatest accomplishments as a musician is to "call myself" a keyboard player... You very clearly are what I like to call myself. 

    This is beautiful. 

    The piano is the 1st instrument anyone should learn as it is the foundation for all other music IMO. 

    The pedals, the dynamics, the pauses, the runs... This was masterfully played and a joy to listen to. 

    I may have brightened you a bit more, but my ears are not what they were. And I'm pretty sure this was a live piano performance, because I can hear the pre-amps. It would be nice to hear it recorded in Ivory, and bounced on the grand, with the right verb and pad... But this is "masterfully played..." Just really really good.  Excellent keyboards.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/09 22:04:46 (permalink)
     
    Band19 - Thanks so much for the listen and comments.  It is a pleasure to play the real thing and obtain control of the dynamics of the instrument.  Each grand I've played over the years has it's own character/personality and it takes some "playing time" to be able to eventually get those unique attributes out of each different grand.  It is very hard for me to get that level of expression out of the plugin products...although the plugins (similar to Ivory, etc.) do fit a purpose too... for the right mixes.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/10 10:26:59 (permalink)
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    very nice - Shawn

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/10 13:59:52 (permalink)
    Jeff:  absolutely stunning - hearing this really made my day.  I'm like Warren, I was just giving a listen to something really heavy and then this hit me square and knocked the breath out of me!  haha!   What an awesome, sweet piece and this could never be a synth'd sound.  I don't know what better words to give it - I could listen all day long.  And my vote is, it doesn't need any other instruments, nothing could improve on this sound - but different?  yeah, it can make it slightly different.   I want to listen to more of this stuff so keep posting.  And re-posting.   !!!   -John    

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/10 21:41:49 (permalink)
    Yes, this is some of the nicest solo piano I've heard in awhile. Doesn't need anything else to make it work. Thanks for sharing!

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/13 09:21:19 (permalink)
    Nice to see you around again these parts, Jay.

    Superb touch and feel.
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/13 12:09:58 (permalink)
    Nice relaxed vibe.  I think you could have taken the song up a step at the end just to mix things up.

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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/13 16:58:58 (permalink)
    Jeff,
     
    Beautiful piece.  It certainly stands on it's own.  If anything added, I would give a +1 to a brush kit and stand-up bass.   Maybe a far off muted trumpet here and there.   That said, it's good to go as is....
     
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/14 11:50:54 (permalink)
    Beautiful, really a lovely, sweet listen. :) Lee
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    Re:Piano Instrumental - "Oh February" 2012/10/14 16:56:20 (permalink)
     Cool I like this , I'm working on a new song with alot of piano in it but this music you created has me thinking you have me beat with your piano skills . 

    Nice , I like your style of playing and the this music -James
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