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montezuma
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April 02, 18 3:47 AM (permalink)

Picture of Health - new song

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Here's the new version. The top 4 songs have all been remixed and sound way better I think:
 
https://soundcloud.com/us...8625/picture-of-health
 
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    montezuma
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song April 06, 18 11:32 AM (permalink)
    My mistake
    post edited by montezuma - April 09, 18 2:28 AM
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song April 15, 18 6:15 PM (permalink)
    Boy I like both the songs you have posted. I think "My Cherie" is the better of the two though. The lyrics are great. Like John Lennon before he got stupid. 
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    montezuma
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song April 16, 18 8:04 AM (permalink)
    Haha, that's an interesting observation...when did he get stupid? It can't ever have been while The Beatles were together!?
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song April 16, 18 3:17 PM (permalink)
    I agree with Wayfarer ... very Lennon like, liked it a lot (love your lyrics)
     
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song May 07, 18 5:36 PM (permalink)
    Terrific demo of your song -- the bass is bubbling and I really like the guitar work.  Vocals are cool as are the lyrics.  Drums could be better but hey...  You know if this had a strong melodic hook built around the title, it would really hit home.
    Good luck,
    Allan
     
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song May 08, 18 0:31 PM (permalink)
    Cool song! Kind of reminded me of Stealers Wheel a little bit. Nice fun beat and great vocals. Mix sounded good to me!
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song May 10, 18 10:20 AM (permalink)
    montezuma
    Haha, that's an interesting observation...when did he get stupid? It can't ever have been while The Beatles were together!?


    Too much post Beatles partying with Harry Nilsson. Harry could fry anybody's brain back then. 
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song May 10, 18 2:53 PM (permalink)
    It's a cool tune - the rhythm and lead guitar sound nice to my ears.  As I've mentioned before, I like your lead vocal - it has a laid back quality to it that I like.  I liked that ending too - nice touch there.

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    montezuma
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    Re: Picture of Health - new song June 01, 18 9:52 PM (permalink)
    Thanks a lot Doug I appreciate you listening and commenting
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