Pink Floyd "Sorrow" in warp

This is a fun piece to play along with, its got a kick. Put together some chords from Sorrow, but instead of learning the lead, I took the easy way out and just jam to it. My short fingers keep me from blazing a guitar lead, let alone just warm it up.   Will have to get brother to redo the leads. He has a near perfect rendition of "Sorrow" on my SoundCloud page.
 
Re-Mix:5-30-14
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12799868&q=hi

I second everything Beagle said. It sounds to me like the distortion may be coming from the bass guitar. The mix is good , aside from the things mentioned, to my ears. Cool tune , like the guitar tone and the playing.

+1 to the above: good performance, the mix just needs some work.
 
I'm sure there are more appropriate articles for DAW use, but this podcasting article covers some of the basics so still might help. 
http://auphonic.com/blog/2011/07/25/loudness-normalization-and-compression-podcasts-and-speech-audio/
 

I'm a novice at mixing myself. But for what it's worth, I like the mix. I especially like the sound of the guitars. You put some nice texture in there with the keyboards too. 

hmmmmm sound good but i this the drum need work. are they analog?

I'm gonna go out on a limb here, I thought the mix was pretty spot on. I really cranked it up and thought it sounded very 70's ish, with lots of guitar right up front. With a bit of compression on the drums (read snare), and the master bus, there could be a better overall balance between the lead and the rhythm, which could make it sound more modern, but I think it's very close as is.

Thanks again, I'm checking out stevec's link on basics for DAW, I just not sure when someone refers to adding compression to the drums and master bus what they mean. But sounds like good advice so I'm going there. Its just I hate having to read a manual before I break something (backwards logic).
I need a good drum sw, any suggestions? I have tried using two fingers as sticks playing keys using a couple different percussion sw but found that I not only had no singing voice, but no rythem either. And the library sets didn't suit my stlye.
What has humbled me is the nice compliments on my guitar, which I know is not flashy, smooth and not always exactly on key (which is intentional sometimes like Hendrix and Trower) Constructive critisim this forum provides puts a lot of ears and knowledge on your work, so as a longtime beginner I test what I understand, and struggle with terms, hints or advice on those I'm not familiar with. My wife says I ought to get one of those special guitars for short finger people, when I realised she was refering to a ukalalee I asked her, "ever wonder how many groupies in the past chased after the lead ukalalee player after a concert?" went right over her head. And besides Hendrix would been in extreme danger as ukalalee's are very flamable. ok I'll stop. no progress yet on redo of drum-bass track. cap

the overall mix i think sounds great, it's just the volume is low. i'm kinda going around listening to a bunch of people's stuff this morning and it's noticeably lower than anyone else's. that being said it sounds really cool.

I must have listened to an improved version as this mix seemed pretty decent to me. You could make it hotter but it wasn't really necessary from my end. Nice instrumental!

thanks Starise
Wookiee-man I wish I could sing, it would give another dimension to my music. my soundcloud page has my brother's version of "Sorrow" with his first attempt at singing and wasn't too bad, but his guitar work was a near copy of Gilmour, as is his version of Gilmour's "Raise my Rent", guitar lead starting at the 1:05 mark. This lead and lead in "Another Brick in the Wall" are my all time favorite guitar leads. I envy you seeing this guy play live.