MarkusClinus
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Pismo In Dusk (SECOND new mix - with guitars panned)
Pismo is a small central California coastal town with a population of about 11,000. I started writing and recording this tune in April - about half way through my wife and I went to stay in our place in Pismo for two weeks. I finished this tune today, a few days after getting back from Pismo - couldn't get that place out of my head. I played everything on this one - the drums are BFD. So, my new tune is Pismo In Dusk. Thanks for taking a listen. https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13733806
post edited by MarkusClinus - 2018/05/31 18:31:57
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bjornpdx
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/05/30 03:59:55
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Reminds me of driving along Hwy 1 on a warm August night many years ago. Windows rolled down to catch the ocean breeze and singing along with the radio, young and care free.
Nice tune and well played.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/05/30 12:54:37
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Nice playing on this Mark. Mixwise, I think better separation between the two guitars would improve the clarity. Right now, the guitars are stepping on each other a bit here and there.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/05/30 13:16:24
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Lovely Mark - really moody. Nice composition.
Mixwise, I have to agree with Dan - the guitars seem to be competing. Should be an easy fix though.
Lovely
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/05/31 11:14:28
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Nice mood Mark but as the others have noted better separation of the two guitars would add to the feel.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/05/31 18:31:06
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Beautiful tone and playing. The lead guitar reverb is very nice but some of the reverb on the drums etc could be cut a bit. A good listen --  Allan
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/06/02 21:17:43
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Mark
Very cool song. I definitely get a beach town at dusk vibe from this composition. Playing is outstanding and really like your chord choices too.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/06/04 01:35:24
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I clicked on link but no luck. The song didn't stream.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/06/05 03:20:49
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Currently, i like the guitar work, but not so much the tone. It sounds very amp sim like. I'd expect recording it through an amp would be a big improvement. Also there seems to be a lot of clipping.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/06/05 21:53:05
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Great work good movement. Works for me Thanks
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Re: Pismo In Dusk
2018/06/07 13:11:26
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Nice piece, perfect early morning mood too. Just love the guitar soloing in this. So tasty and interesting.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk (SECOND new mix - with guitars panned)
2018/06/07 15:54:00
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That's some very cool lead guitar play on this one - nice job.
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Re: Pismo In Dusk (SECOND new mix - with guitars panned)
2018/06/18 19:50:54
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Mix critiques already covered, I love the performances on this one. The clean lead guitar part with the verb/delay has a great "watery" quality yet still warm and thick. Just enjoyable to listen to...
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