Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song

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ruralrocker2010
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2012/03/11 17:16:37 (permalink)

Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song

Critique if you like; I'm sharing this because it was fun for me...that's all. If you like it, tell me.  If you don't, you can tell me that too.

I actually wouldn't mind an evaluation melody, hook, etc. 

http://soundcloud.com/joshua-barnes/please-remember-me 

http://soundcloud.com/joshua-barnes/please-remember-me-louder like it says...louder - and...I added a harmony to the chorus. Thank's Bapu!


I got my new external compressor this last week, so I'm having loads of fun singing and playing...because I can finally hear myself and get a fatter sound without all the processing being done in Sonar...which is nice. And it's tube!

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    bapu
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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 17:27:19 (permalink)
    Joshua,

    May I suggest some harmony on the chorus?

    The vol on the mix was pretty low, I had to turn it real loud just to "hear" it.

    Nice toon. 

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 18:32:47 (permalink)
    Hey Joshua
    I also had to turn the volume all the way up. Even then it was hard to hear. What I could hear sounded real good.

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 18:57:12 (permalink)
    I might have mixed it down at my monitor level, rather than production level. I'll fix it.

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 19:21:03 (permalink)
    Sounds good but if def needs a master. 

    Vocals and playing are excellent.

    Keep it coming.

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 20:02:18 (permalink)
    I upped the volume and added that harmony...

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/11 20:44:44 (permalink)
     Good playing and vocals. The  volume on this copy is low though.I'll try and listen to the other one you changed.

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    Re:Please Remember Me - Acoustic Folk Song 2012/03/12 18:35:13 (permalink)
    I like this song because it's raw but real at the same time.  Your singing style is unique, and that is good because it stands out of the pack and is memorable.  The other day I critiqued your vocal, but now that I've heard you sing a few more times, I'm getting into it.  If you ever play at Jerry's 
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