kennywtelejazz
 Hello Ed and James ,
You are certainly off to a great start  with this song .
I dig all the playing for sure ….
Nice groove , sweet guitar , bass is in the pocket …
You got all the right ingredients for the main track .
I hope it's OK if I offer some crits . I agree w Steve . The Vox needs more meat .
I like the Piano a lot and it may need to come up a little for the solo …
I'm hearing a group of soulful female background singers in my head as the song plays 
May be worth considering ? it may take it over the top and fit well with the genre ..
 
Good Job fellas for sure 
 
all the best ,
 
Kenny

ABeautifulVirus
great tune - I'm loving the signature bass sound - guitar solo is extra tasty esp the last five notes it's something I would do -
 
 -Daren  

mgh
finally got round to listening
and not read the earlier comments
i would soften the kick a little (slightly pulled back and more thud)
bass is excellent (natch) but maybe a little forward compared to guitars and keys