Quick Help on Birthday Poem

I'd add:

Love,
Claude

The time of year is here to give,  you a  birthday cheer
To tell you how I feel and will,  for all our years.
A blessing you truly are,   I cherish every day.
And a cake with candles shining bright for a wish 
and something I'd like to say..

I love you dear,   you brighten up my life-
So blow out,  the candles shining bright
for wishes all meant for you. 
And I will smile and feel a man when I look into your eyes
And we will know as our love is true,   as we celebrate your life.


I don't know Bill....just what I was inspired to write after reading yours.
I really don't write, Jeff does, so sorry for whatever's wrong.

Try a limerick.  The ladies love a good limerick for their birthday. 

(or do they?)

How about this ...

I got a girl named Boney Moronie.
She's as skinny as a stick of macaroni.
Ought to see her rock and roll with her blue jeans on.
She's not very fat, just skin and bone.
But I love her and she loves me.
We're all happy now as we can be.
Making love underneath the apple tree.

Well, I told her mama and her papa too
Just exactly what I want to do.
I want to get married on a night in June,
And rock and roll by the light of the silvery moon.
Cause I love her and she loves me,
We're all happy now as we can be.
Making love underneath the apple tree.

She's my one and only, she's my heart's desire.
She's a real upsetter, she's a real live wire.
Everybody turns when my baby goes by.
She's something to see, she really catches the eye.
I love her and she loves me,
We're all happy now, as we can be.
Making love underneath the apple tree.

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Or maybe play a nice slow love song for her. One that's very rare ...

Say You Love Me

Cover version of an old 50's song by me and a bud in NJ. Previously unreleased.

bapu

UbiquitousBubba


Try a limerick.  The ladies love a good limerick for their birthday. 

(or do they?)

Only the ones about that dude from Nantucket (is what I've heard).

I think its supposed to be a GIRL from Nantucket

UbiquitousBubba


I think Bapu's been listening to some alternative poetry.

An older boy made me do it, sir.

bapu

UbiquitousBubba


I think Bapu's been listening to some alternative poetry.

 
An older boy made me do it, sir.

That older boy needs a bloody good polishing.
 
 
 

The Kiosk Project


Roses are red
Violets are Blue
Some poems rhyme
But this one doesn't

Bill, if you mean all those things, it won't matter how it sounds or exactly how you word it.  She should be thrilled. :-)

Is her name really Boney? 

Cute.  :-)

I may have blown it! I just got off the phone with her and she asked me if I got a cake. I said yes and she asked " Are there candles because I want to make a wish" and I said "Well I couldn't find that many candles to put on the cake".

D'OH!!

Is there no end to my stupidity? Is the night salvageable?
I do have a poem!!! 

LORD LORDY LORD LORD

We're going out to dinner so I have time.

Tell her you needed a lot of candles because you want to grant her hundreds of wishes.
 
Edit:
Forget her age in all conversations until she asks about it or brings it up then say "Your still 18 to me."

Skip Whitman and Gore... 

This is an occasion when you need Ben Jonson:

Drink to me, only, with thine eyes,
And I will pledge with mine ;
Or leave a kiss but in the cup,
And I'll not look for wine.
The thirst that from the soul doth rise,
Doth ask a drink divine :
But might I of Jove's nectar sup,
I would not change for thine.

I sent thee, late, a rosy wreath,
Not so much honoring thee,
As giving it a hope, that there
It could not wither'd be.
But thou thereon didst only breathe,
And sent'st it back to me :
Since when it grows, and smells, I swear,
Not of itself, but thee. 



(The title is, "For Celia")


If this doesn't get you out of trouble, it should at least keep you from having to sleep in the garage... 

  Way to go, Bill!  :-)

Bub


Heh, what did she think of the "I'M KING OF THE WORLD!" part?

Sorry but that part's private.

Janet


  Way to go, Bill!  :-)

I asked her where she wanted to go eat. My choice was a fancy steak house. She said" Let's go the the best Mexican Dinner place in town". Is there something us guys don't or should know about Mexican food? I noticed yours disappeared real fast.