Red Rooster - lyrics & Vocals added

Hi everyone been busy working on my Red Rooster song , took your advice with the reverb issue and removed most of that in the music and then worked on some lyrics for the music , last time I added vocals was four years ago and same with lyrics so I might be a somewhat rusty but here it is anyway.
Please let me know if you hear any type of crackle sound going on , I downloaded this free MP3 converter .
http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13378924&q=hi

Sounds like a pretty good Mix James. Although it sounded to me like your vocals started out off timing right from the start, you rushed it at the start although the rest sounded better fitting the tune. I wouldn't change the vocals except for the start of the song, the first line, it was really obviously off timing for a start. 
 
It's a little out there and kinda dirty, but then again, it is about a Rooster. 
 
I enjoyed hearing this one James, had some laughs along the way, it's a Character song who happens to be known as "The Red Rooster". Very creative and well done except for the starting lyrics timing, just the start the rest sounded fine. 
 
As for the mix, I think the vocals might be lowered just a slight bit and raise the volume of the overall mix and add a little bit more reverb on the vocals. But that's just me and the way I hear it, although my hearing isn't what it used to be and I've been dealing with allergies so take my opinion on the mix as a grain of salt, I am no mix master. 
 
Enjoyed hearing this one James!!! Thanks for sharing!!! Also : It was nice to hear a song of yours with Vocals on it for a change, it really changes the perspective of what you are going for with your music when it's finished and has words and vocals. 
 
 

J.S.
Thanks Bobby for your comments on my vocal song , yea like I had mentioned before it's been four years or so singing and writing lyrics so I'm rusty at it but hey I gave it my best with this one that was more of a joke song for my long time best friend Steve .
He lived in Las Vegas for many years and told me about this place called the Red Rooster so after giving me the details I started calling him the Red Rooster everytime I called him . LOL
Then I got this ideal in my head to create a song for him called " Red Rooster " .
This is the first song I have created that has sexual overtones and Lyrics but there's really nothing too dirty in the lyrics .
Yes it's not a Christian song , the devil might be thanking me for this tune ! LOL
Dam let's hear it for James , this one is for me ! LOL

Thanks again for the listen and comments Bobby !
LOL maybe next song I will do a Christian song and really blow every ones minds !

There is nothing wrong with the content of your song James, it's a risky type of content word wise type of song. I don't get why nobody isn't listening or replying, that just ain't right. You poured your heart out, funny song or not and followed everyone's advice on what they thought you should do listening to this new version.
 
It's a story song with a character called "THE RED ROOSTER" character singing he is the king of hooking up with girls. 
 
I enjoyed hearing the music a second time to figure out what it was all about. The words were really entertaining. Music was spot on. You should post more songs with words because that's what everyone wants to hear, ya know A SONG.  Although only people over their 40's would get this song as a joke guess. 
 
It does have some sex content in there with the words. But it's in a comical way. Like I said though, Not everyone will get the comical side and the fact that you wrote this for a friend of yours who told you a story and had some fun making a song with words with it. 
 
Either way, This was really great the more I listen and think about what you started with and ended up creating. That's what so many are missing. 
 
That's my full review James, I'm no Mix Master, You know that, and I am your Friend : AT LEAST I HOPE SO: but I wanted to point a few things out others might have missed. 
 
 
Please post all future songs with words & vocals and FINISHED and roll from there........ 
 
Enjoyed hearing this AGAIN with the REMIX..... 
 
 
 
 
 
 

While I thought it was funny James, I didn't see it as any kind of "JOKE SONG", I thought it was very well done and enjoyed hearing it. 
 

Well it looks like you have 395 views and No replies. I guess these bible belt holier than thou church going mofo's just don't wanna reply or give it a listen. 
 
James, if I win the lottery, on my way to Vegas in a Limo I am going to pick you up along the way and we will be blasting this song over the speakers on YOUR way to the red rooster ranch, as for me, I'm going to the BUNNY RANCH just to make a few new real friends who know what being screwed means and well, maybe give a few babe's there a little hug............ Hahahahahahahahaa
 
 

Ha ha ha funny Bobby ! LOL

Thanks Stevec for commenting on my song , I played it for my long time friend Steve today and he laugh and said thanks he liked it wanting me to send him a CD copy .
Yea it's a one of a kind song alright , as for the reverb I took most of the reverb out of all my recorded tracks .
Before it was swimming in reverb just like they said so I corrected that by removing half of what was in each recorded track .
Anyway thanks again glad you enjoyed it , I wouldn't go to the Red Rooster barn in Vegas but it was fun creating and singing about it ! LOL

Thanks !
J.S.

Thanks for the listen , yea had to come up with something funny for my good friend Steve . LOL
Thanks thepogue !
J.S.

You had me smiling on this one, James!

Who is the Rooster James? Name the characters? That would be kinda cool............ 
 
Sorry to put you in such a Pickle of a situation by asking, but I thought I would ask. 
 
While the content of this tune of yours is rather ADULT and out there, I really do like it my friend. It tells a Story and takes the listeners on a journey. 
 
So I must ask, knowing my last line of opinions. Will there be a Part 2 to this story? Or perhaps a book?