Remixed With a little help from my friend.

Drums seem a bit lost. On purpose?

Seems like the whole kit to me. 

Clever lyrics.  I like this song but gently suggest that you relook at some of the parts ( the rhythm guitar seems a little out of sync at some points) and the vocals and guitar could be brought forward in the mix - likely by just taking off some of the reverb.  I also agree with Bapu that drum level is low.  I also think the mix could be widened a little.
 
Picky stuff though, because the main thing is that you've written a cool tune!    

Catchy tune.  I was a bit lax on listening to the lyrics.  Caught some that were cool.  My first listen on all songs seems to go to instruments.  I'll give another listen here soon.  Different from what I was expecting from the furry one!  I liked it and I liked it the more I heard.

Thanks Warren please to see you drop in and spend some time with my efforts.
 
Hi Gus yes I agree the drums are small so I am in the process of revisiting to see what I can do with them there drums.  Thanks for the listen and the comment.

Nice song.. me likes

On the mix? The drums need to pop a bit more, the snare and ride. The vocals seem a little lifeless? I think it's mostly EQ, and I would boost them a bit and give them a bit more presence (and a highpass if they don't have one) Not sure if other things are fighting with the vox in the middle, but some scoops from the bass, and pans with the guitars and other instruments may help (didn't DL/listen to the mid and sides) But hey? EVERYBODY'S a producer!! So these observations and recommendations may or may not be accurate. I like my new cans though :-) Also, not sure how you made him moist? i.e., verb + delay? If you're using verb, you should kill the low end from it and spread it (works for me) and if there's a delay, try to time it/beat sync and either use features and or envelopes to make it pronounced where it should be, and removed from where it should not be. And it can be fun to send an output from the delay back in to the vox verb. And use an auto-panner on the verb? And a ping pong on the delay? It helps make it all "move..." YMMV and less is more, until it's not? Then more is better.

More great advice Robbie!
Good luck Wook :)

Thanks Phil, though not me singing the vocal is my good friend who wrote the lyrics.
 
It has been remixed and is currently awaiting approval from certain quarters.

Right from the beginning, it sounds much better to me. This is a noticeable improvement. Tell Chris good job. When he says "You're a ..." could I get him to record a version just for me where he actually calls her out by name? (the ex.) Just kidding.
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Observation leads to education. Education leads to enlightenment. Enlightenment leads to a higher power.

Yeah Wook, You've done a great job on this. :)

Do you have to join FB to listen? I don't go there. anywhere else? thanks  capg

CaptG the link above is for Reverbnation and no you do not have to sink to the depths of the daemon Facebook
 
Con Passion remix First song on the list.
 
Thanks Robert is that even on the remix? just so you know it is not me singing if it was you would be like the parrot in the famous Parrot sketch 

Guitarpima
That link takes me to a log in page.

Opps 
The link below will take you to the vocalist Reverbnation page again first on the list.
Con Passion
 
My very humble and most furry apologies  

Guitarpima
The drums are much better but I think the hi hat and cymbals are too loud now.

Thanks Robert pleased you enjoyed the remix though the brass crashy things were a tad to loud.