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nelansdad
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2005/01/15 00:53:15 (permalink)

SONG: Critique

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I'll Never Be As Lonely As You
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    rgfors
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 01:01:04 (permalink)
    Very well done, I'm impressed (and I'm not a fan of country!)

    The tone of the vocal is outstanding. If that is you singing, you've got a great voice!

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    nelansdad
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 01:02:49 (permalink)
    Thanks!

    REM
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    kidsoncoffee
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 01:34:34 (permalink)
    Nice work all the way around.

    joe
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 03:12:34 (permalink)
    This song has the potential to be great. The idea is great, the melody, the production is classic. Now if I were writing it, I would establish in the first verse why you will never be as lonely.... because she did, or said, or left....

    Establish the hurt factor. Etch it in stone. Then do your thing from there. Although I love this tune just like it is, I'm curious to know why you express this great hook.

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    nelansdad
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 10:44:01 (permalink)
    Thanks Joe!

    REM
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    nelansdad
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 10:53:21 (permalink)
    Thanks! I like your advise, however it may be too late for this one.

    She left (for a better life) and took my little girl, I remarried and am quiet happy, but she's alone now with a sucessful hair business. I guess it's a "don't you wish you hadn't left tune".
    I never really meant for her to hear it. It's just a song. I got the hook mowing the front yard in '02.

    REM
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 15:38:01 (permalink)
    I'm not a huge country fan either, however I do love Bluegrass, and this is a very well written song. Seems to me that almost everything has a bit too much echo or reverb on it. maybe DDL? Only problem I had with it. Other than that, like, woah. Very catchy hook, great vocal sound, good lyrics. Good solo. And very nice touch with the mandolin on the left side. Cool stuff, man.

    The zen philosopher Basho once wrote, "A flute with no holes is not a flute, but a doughnut with no hole, is a danish."
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 19:52:18 (permalink)
    ORIGINAL: rgfors

    Very well done, I'm impressed (and I'm not a fan of country!)

    The tone of the vocal is outstanding. If that is you singing, you've got a great voice!


    Ditto what Randy said. Great job!

    -Gary

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    m11
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/15 21:00:18 (permalink)
    Hi nelansdad,

    Ok, you have a nice and clean mix here.
    Maybe you could enhance the sound of the acoustic guitar somehow. It sounds a bit thin. Is it a 12string?

    One thing I would like to know: Did you use autotune or something similar. Is the voice harmonics done with something like vocalist or voice works?

    Greets
    Melf
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    Chad Beattie
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    RE: SONG: Critique 2005/01/16 00:12:09 (permalink)
    Nice job. Very clean and vocals sound really good.
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