Leadfoot
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Voda La Void
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Man I really dig the music in this. Every part was good quality riffage and solid progressions, especially the bridge, really liked that riff you're singing over there. You made the drums interesting too, the opening makes you pay attention to them. Nicely played. You sing great, have a very good voice, but the vocals in general on this didn't really work, in my opinion. The lyric delivery seemed a little awkward, like it was being forced to fit in a section of music. Small crit really, and is just an opinion. The song definitely rocks.
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Wookiee
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Some nice playing on this, all sounds well captured. Vocal sounds OK to me but then I do have furry alien ears.
Thanks for sharing.
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Leadfoot
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Voda La Void Man I really dig the music in this. Every part was good quality riffage and solid progressions, especially the bridge, really liked that riff you're singing over there. You made the drums interesting too, the opening makes you pay attention to them. Nicely played. You sing great, have a very good voice, but the vocals in general on this didn't really work, in my opinion. The lyric delivery seemed a little awkward, like it was being forced to fit in a section of music. Small crit really, and is just an opinion. The song definitely rocks.
Hey Voda, Thanks for the kind words man! I appreciate you checking it out! I can't argue with you on the vocal delivery on this.... Not one of my best. You described it pretty acurately. I do appreciate the compliments as well as the crits! I'm glad you liked the music! Thanks man!
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Makke
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Nice rock song with variable parts. Good job.
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dcumpian
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I liked this, but I can see where Tim is coming from on the timing of certain phrases. I could get used to it, however, so it certainly isn't a deal breaker.
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Leadfoot
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Wookiee Some nice playing on this, all sounds well captured. Vocal sounds OK to me but then I do have furry alien ears.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Wookiee! I appreciate it man!
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dougk1824
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Wow Leadfoot - this song really rocks - it really kicks in after the intro. Made me thing of Ratt or Dokken back in the 80's.
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daryl1968
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good stuff Leadfoot - love the intro/verse(?) sections
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Wayfarer
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Sounds like Resurrection Band reborn. (Yes, that's a compliment. )
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Leadfoot
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Makke Nice rock song with variable parts. Good job.
Thanks Makke.
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Leadfoot
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dcumpian I liked this, but I can see where Tim is coming from on the timing of certain phrases. I could get used to it, however, so it certainly isn't a deal breaker.
Regards, Dan
Thanks for checking it out Dan. Yeah, it definitely has room for improvement... I'm glad you liked it anyway!
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michaelhanson
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Everything sounds great to me Leadfoot. Nice song, great musicianship, great production.
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Leadfoot
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dougk1824 Wow Leadfoot - this song really rocks - it really kicks in after the intro. Made me thing of Ratt or Dokken back in the 80's.
Hey Doug, thanks man! There was lots of good rock/metal in the 80s. I spent lots of money on albums back then. I appreciate you listening!
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kakku
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Very good. Skillful playing and good melodies and singing
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Leadfoot
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daryl1968 good stuff Leadfoot - love the intro/verse(?) sections
Thanks Daryl! I appreciate it man, and I'm happy you like it!
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Leadfoot
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Wayfarer Sounds like Resurrection Band reborn. (Yes, that's a compliment. )
Resurrection Band...hmmm... I'll have to look them up. I'll take your word for it though! Thanks man!
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Leadfoot
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michaelhanson Everything sounds great to me Leadfoot. Nice song, great musicianship, great production.
Thanks Mike! I appreciate you checking it out!
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Leadfoot
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kakku Very good. Skillful playing and good melodies and singing
Thanks kakku! I appreciate you listening and posting your comments!
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stevec
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Good song! I very much enjoyed that. Though this doesn't happen often for me, one of the things that stood out was the snare - nice.
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Leadfoot
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Thank you Steve! I appreciate the kind words man! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for listening!
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