Re: School thoughts never come true .. but you just wish (as a boy in love)
2018/06/07 17:17:20
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Not bad I do wonder if the middle eight could do with a change of feel as it is all a bit samey
This vocal
"
On these summer nights you .. dream of walking beside her ..
Then she's laughing .. as you tell her she's beautiful ...
(Slow build + harmony)
Those perfect boys look with envy in their eye's as you kiss her ..
(Lightening strikes as the dream ends and morning arrives)
Your world explodes and the dream slips away.
With the ringing in your ears, (Rain fall)
Telling you another day
Has begun …..."
Just bring up the tempo and a slightly harder, edgy, feel, vibe and sound.
Thanks for sharing.
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