She's Divine

This is exceptional... The guitars, the bass, the drums, the vocals, the sax... Love those assets... I like the lead guitar that's there? But this song cries out for a lead guitarist... There are a few here? The mix is awesome. But with the right lead work, the lead should stand out a bit more. And I would make the lead vox a bit wetter, and add some delay? But I'm well know for liking it too wet... Or is it really? :-) Sometimes? Wetter is better dude :-) 

Really enjoyed the song! Don't let my comments give any other impression, it was Yeoman's work...

Hi bandontherun19, thanks for the first comment!  I played the lead and all but the bass (thanks Bapu!).  You are absolutely right about the lead guitar.  I am learning and don't mind putting myself out there but it would be great to hear a real guitarist do his/her thing.  I really appreciate your comments.  This was fun throughout.  I have to commute 30 miles each way to work and when I have a new song, I play the heck out of it to get ideas.  Today, after building the mix, I spent about 3 hours and called it done.  Life is good.  Creativity is essential for me.  Thanks for the listen. 

Rimshot

For the record I played my Spacey 5-String on this one.

EXCELLENT JOB!  I'm listening on cheap computer speakers and she is sounding great. If I had to NIT, I would bring the bass and the backing vocals up just a smidge.  I probably should leave the mix up to others listening on quality speakers. KUDOS GENTS!

Kev

Bapu, that pic is great.  I am putting it on my wall.  Nice bass and amp too!

Rim

PGShadow, much thanks.  In a life a long time ago, I found myself selling organs at the Organ Exchange in the Glendale Galleria (California) for commission only, six days a week.  Yikes!  It did help me learn some organ chops and did put a little food on the table for about a year.  Then I got signed to Warner Brother's Music with a song writer's publishing deal.  

When I record, I usually play the organ parts really quickly live and then spend a while cleaning it all up in PRV.  I don't think I have received a comment about my organ playing like this in decades and it made me feel good.  Thanks again.
Rim

Thanks Randy.  I always put the ride in context to looking at the kit from the audience perspective.  Also, as a studio drummer for many years, the stereo image in my cans was set up to mimic the kit from my perspective.  I got used to recording like that and then mixing from the audience perspective if they could get that close to the drums!  I also tend to like a wider stereo image of drums on recordings than more centered.  

Rimshot

Hi Lynn, thanks for the feedback on my lead guitar parts (LOL).  I am really having fun learning and playing guitar like this.  Always wanted to for 30 years and now I am doing it and pushing myself to get better.  Thanks.

Rimshot

Rimshot


 In a life a long time ago, I found myself selling organs at the Organ Exchange in the Glendale Galleria (California) for commission only, six days a week.  

I probably walked right by you at least a few times.

That was very pleasant all in all.  Thanks for sharing

I need an English dictionary!  Thanks much Steve! 

Rimshott

fantastic, gentlemen (well, maybe I should say "fantastic gentleman and bapu...") 

really good stuff!

  at least I didn't say you needed a new bass player!  LOL!

Hi Jimmy,

Great tune! The mix/production and performances are fantastic. I'm listening on a laptop so I can't really hear much bass but I'm sure Bapu's part is perfect Well done!

Hi Jimmy,

Sorry the bass was shy on your system

I'm sure the bass is mixed correctly.  It's definitely my laptop that's the problem...no criticism was meant