eko
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Soft As Ice
OK here is the last song from my album to be from 2011 Soft as ice (#11). I hope you don't want me to sing it again you know it takes a lot of whiskey to accomplish such a voice. Any comments are welcome. https://soundcloud.com/egon1/soft-as-ice
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foxwolfen
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/08 14:44:26
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Well, I like this. Given its an old song, I suspect you are not planning on much more work on it, but it needs a bit of clearing up in the vox and more crystal in the highs IMO. Fairly minor stuff actually. Enjoyed that a lot.
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Beagle
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/08 16:52:14
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Eko - song is interesting, I like it.
the mix needs a lot of work, tho, IMO. vocals are too hot and sound like they have a lot of room recorded with them. there's a squeek on something that's really bad.
mix is muddy and needs some clarity between the instruments.
guitar playing is very good! but the recording/tone could use some work.
cool work! keep it up!
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/08 17:23:10
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Would like to have lead singer in the middle. No he's a bit to the right.
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Lynn
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/08 18:25:52
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eko, this is somewhat different than your other songs, and that is why I enjoy your songs. Others have noted about the mix, and they have valid points. Yet, this is not far from being stellar. In this tune, I like the f/x on your vocal, though I'd experiment with the wet/dry blend. The performances are so good that a few tweaks will elevate this to the top.
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eko
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/09 16:23:41
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Foxwolfen: Well, I like this. Given its an old song, I suspect you are not planning on much more work on it, but it needs a bit of clearing up in the vox and more crystal in the highs IMO. Fairly minor stuff actually. Enjoyed that a lot. Thnx a lot I will bare that in mind
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eko
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/09 16:30:47
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Beagle:Eko - song is interesting, I like it. the mix needs a lot of work, tho, IMO. vocals are too hot and sound like they have a lot of room recorded with them. there's a squeek on something that's really bad. mix is muddy and needs some clarity between the instruments. guitar playing is very good! but the recording/tone could use some work. cool work! keep it up! Eko: Thnx Beagle I did forget to say that Ola once again help me with the guitar All the other stuff I will think of.
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eko
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/09 16:32:12
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MaxB: Would like to have lead singer in the middle. No he's a bit to the right. Eko: I havent noticed that but I will check it out Thnx a lot for commenting
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eko
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Re:Soft As Ice
2012/12/09 16:34:43
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Lynn: eko, this is somewhat different than your other songs, and that is why I enjoy your songs. Others have noted about the mix, and they have valid points. Yet, this is not far from being stellar. In this tune, I like the f/x on your vocal, though I'd experiment with the wet/dry blend. The performances are so good that a few tweaks will elevate this to the top. Eko: Thnx Lynn for your good ideas I don't think there are any FX at all on my song except for some reverb but I will check it up.
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