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2012/06/17 18:08:38 (permalink)

Soft Silent Night


Maybe you'll like this one a little better.  It's due Monday morning at 7:30, so not much time to fix anything, but if you hear something obvious, please let me know. Thanks!  


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    Lynn
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/17 18:32:18 (permalink)
    Janet, I like this version better than the first.  It is an original and fresh look at an old classic.  The orchestration is right on and shows how comfortable you're getting with the tools you have.  As always, your playing is lovely.

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    Janet
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/17 20:56:52 (permalink)
    Thanks Lynn.  I like it a lot better too.  :) I was real tickled when I sat down at my DAW after about 2 months...and I remembered all the shortcut keys.  But I'm surprised I don't have them worn off my computer by now. :)
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/17 21:41:43 (permalink)
    I like this one a lot better! :-D
     
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/17 22:33:01 (permalink)
    I think your mixes have come a long way, and your skills are enviable. But I am not fond of this. Its too busy and does not generate the kind of emotion that I want from this music. Of course that could be because its JUNE!

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/17 22:36:11 (permalink)
    Robby, I thought you would. :)

    Shad...after 82 songs, I hope I've learned a few things. :)  (I only wish I could learn faster!)  Too busy?  Well, hmmm...that's a good point. Thanks! 
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 08:49:44 (permalink)
    I only listened a little way in.... I would expect this to get the nod of approval. 

    good job

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 11:06:08 (permalink)
    Hi Jeanette, very nicely done, I like it. Nice orchestration.  Now how about adding some boogie-woogie ; )

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 12:08:36 (permalink)
    Okay, well, I am late again. What can I say??

     
     
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 14:12:27 (permalink)

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 16:51:04 (permalink)
    Now this one I like..it's quite cinematic. I could visualise someone walking the city streets late on a snowy night, coat collar turned up against the chill.

     
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 17:26:07 (permalink)
    Herb..let's keep our fingers crossed! :)

    Thanks Rik...boogie-woogie?  Now that would have been so perfect! :)

    S. Alf--you're not really late.  And I guess you could say a number of things. :)

    Thanks John!

    Thanks James. I rather like it too.  I can't believe no one has mentioned that I almost ripped off the intro to 'Beth.'  I hadn't heard that song until I heard it on this forum (I know...I lived in a cave)...but it must have worked its way into my brain.  Only later did I realize it.  But with Reece's help, I changed it enough so hopefully I won't be going to jail soon. ;) 

    Shad...again....As soon as I uploaded it last night I realized how I could have totally calmed this down...and I really liked it that way.  I think I should always get up and walk away before I say I'm done...most good things (musically) usually happen AWAY from the DAW for me.  Oh well.  It was late and I was done.  Thanks for the idea though!  
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/18 21:15:22 (permalink)
    I guess I like this one just a little better than the bouncy one, but I'm glad I don't have to choose one over the other for a CD or other use.  

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/20 04:10:31 (permalink)
    Enjoyed this Janet... but now you've got me humming Christmas tunes in June!

    It's a good arrangement - might be a bit busy in the piano backing but the best way to resolve that might be to completely separate the melody from the backing by using an oboe, flute, or violin sample right from the start rather than on the second time through (and then changing it from one to the other).

    I realise it's too late for Monday now... sorry!

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/20 18:48:17 (permalink)
    Thanks again Old.  Yeah, me too. :)

    Yeah, like I told Shad...as soon as I uploaded it, I 'heard' it way more calm.  Oh well... Thanks for the ideas anyway. :)
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/20 20:51:09 (permalink)
    I already commented on this in the other thread.

    This is excellent. I liked the other one better just because it's different, but this is as good as it gets. Excellent playing. Wish I could play half as good as that.

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/20 20:59:01 (permalink)
     I liked this one better than the first one Janet. The melody doesn't jump out and bite you though. It seems more subdued almost balanced with the interwoven parts. I still picked the melody out pretty quickly and enjoyed the way you worked with it.

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/06/20 21:00:24 (permalink)
    Thanks Bub and Tim.  I've got my fingers crossed...but not quitting my day job. :) 
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 07:49:00 (permalink)
    Wow Janet,
    You have a great rendition here! I enjoyed it very much. I like the styling that you put on it and your playing is something to look up to.  

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 09:34:54 (permalink)
    Wow, now that's something coming from you Scott. Thank you! :) Taxi wasn't thrilled, but it was sorta fun to do.
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 10:02:43 (permalink)
    Janet,
    You did great on this. I believe in giving credit where it is due and it certainly is due here. Now go and get "keyed" up for another song!

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 10:06:45 (permalink)
    Very nice Janet...

    Very smooth and soothing....


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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 10:27:43 (permalink)
    Hi Janet , somehow I missed your first version . This version sounds really nice , I like the way your playing this and the mix sounds perfect !
    The only missing is your vocals , DANG !

    Nice job creating this instrumental Janet !
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 10:30:46 (permalink)
    Well, I'm still surprised, Scott. :)  Thanks again. 
    Thank you cclarry! 

    Thanks James. Fortunately it's not too hard to mix a piano solo. :) And my vocals wouldn't help it, believe me.

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 12:21:13 (permalink)
    Very nice Janet! At least it's July now. lol! I'll never understand the "Christmas in July" thing.

    This is very nice. My only crit would be to make sure the melody is a bit louder than the harmony. I always had trouble with this in college playing classical guitar so I know it's not easy.

    Very well done! I enjoyed it!

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 17:48:20 (permalink)
    Hi Janet- As you may have noticed, I have not been around much (moving 4 times in 8 months kinda' limits one's free time), so it's been a while since I've heard your playing and music.  I have to say that I'm blown away, beacuse I just hear you playing with more feeling and creativity every time I do stop back. 

    I thought your interertation on this piece was just brilliant and a genuine pleasure for me to listen to.
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 18:18:29 (permalink)
    Thank you, Guitarpima.  I appreciate that.  Good idea about the melody.  And yeah, Christmas music for a month is plenty for me.  :)

    Well thank you, Phil!  Sorry about moving so much.  Yikes!  I've been in 3 states (and 3 time zones) in 2 weeks...I don't know how people even travel that much, let alone move that much! Blown away?  Well, I'm blown away!  I rarely get to play these days (months), let alone do anything original...maybe I've still got some feeling left in these old fingers anyway. :)   Thanks again.

    Who dug this thread up again anyway?  lol
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 21:25:30 (permalink)
    I thought this was really good. When it's 100 degrees out, thinking about cooler Christmas weather is nice.
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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 22:24:44 (permalink)
    Really nice Janet. 

    (and, the drums were perfect)

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    Re:Soft Silent Night 2012/07/12 22:33:31 (permalink)
    Well, Pete, glad you liked it...maybe I'll get back into music again after all!  (and I'm sick of 100 degree weather too...and the fact that every time I go somewhere else this summer (AK & NC) it's cold and rainy.  grrr...) 

    Thanks Tim.    (had to go back and listen to see if I did put drums in after all.)  Maybe they didn't like those other dumb instruments.  Oh well.  lol
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