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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 04:47:41 (permalink) ☄ Helpful
I really like this - it's haunting. I have subscribed to your youtube channel - let's hear some more
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 07:04:47 (permalink)
I like it. voc needs to come up a bit.

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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 10:32:32 (permalink)
Love the piano lines, melancholy and pretty. Sounds like the vocals are still a work in progress, but this could be a beautiful song.

 
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 10:47:07 (permalink)
nice.  has a Coldplay feel.  also some Radiohead influences w/ the falsetto vocals towards the end.  dig the b & w graphic too.
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 11:13:19 (permalink)
Sounds quite well here quite an ephemeral sound, perhaps a little to much reverb for my taste that is just a personal thing.

Thanks for sharing.

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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 12:10:20 (permalink)
A demo?  I don't think you have far to go for a finished product.  Try some of the above suggestions, and let's see where it takes you.  This has great potential.

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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 13:42:55 (permalink)
I liked this quite a bit as well.  Is the piano sampled or real? I'm suspecting it's a real piano in an untreated room?

If sampled I'd back off the 'verb and add back in some of the lows. If real, you may need to re-record and use some baffles/gobos to dry it out a bit. Either that or switch to a sampled instrument...heck, if you want you can send it to me as a MIDI file and I'll run it through EWQL Pianos and send you the resultant audio file...
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/08 14:29:42 (permalink)
Thanks everyone. I'm in love with Reverb so it's hard for me to back off 
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/09 11:31:28 (permalink)
What everyone else said.

Thanks for sharing.
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/09 16:47:20 (permalink)
Excellent feel to it.
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Re:Song I wrote and recorded in my bedroom 2012/07/09 17:26:53 (permalink)
Doesn't feel like a home recording at all. Sounds pretty cool. You sing with a lot of air!

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