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2012/01/14 10:23:35 (permalink)

Song - Timeless

Work in progress! Is the music understable? Thanks guys for feed back i went back and changed mix around and added some more sounds. http://soundcloud.com/eomak/tmeless-remixed
post edited by EOMAK - 2012/01/19 21:23:33
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    jamesg1213
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 11:42:37 (permalink)
    Sounding OK so far. Drums, especially snare and cymbal crashes, seem very loud against the rest. The first section up to about 0:40 could use some variation, or take some elements out and bring them in gradually.

     
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 12:22:02 (permalink)
    You're off to a good start.  This piece sustained my interest because of the melody and chord changes.  Nice mix.  Will you add vocals, or will it be instrumental?

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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 12:51:37 (permalink)
    thanks well try some of those options.
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 12:53:25 (permalink)
    Hi thanks ,not sure.
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 14:35:25 (permalink)
    so far so good..... 

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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 21:19:07 (permalink)
    I'm tending to agree with James that the patterns are a bit too repetitve through the first 0:40.   You might want to bring things in more gradually building the sound up through the first part.  It needs something to add a bit more variety in the beginning.
     
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/14 22:24:37 (permalink)
    Hi, thanks.I went back to the drawing board changed things around and added some more sounds. Thanks for the advise.
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    Re:This sound understandable? 2012/01/18 10:53:42 (permalink)
    Nice One! I like the bass line on this. Very ambient.


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