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easyjoey
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2011/02/23 22:00:33 (permalink)

Song for you to hear... feeback wanted

I just uploaded a track to soundcloud.  You can listen to it with this link:

http://soundcloud.com/easyjoey/valve-city


The dialogue samples and some of the sounds are from the French film called "City of Lost Children."  

Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback.

Thanks

Joe

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    bapu
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    Re:Song for you to hear... feeback wanted 2011/02/23 22:19:55 (permalink)
    Bass guitar and drums work well together. Drums could be a tad louder (IMO).

    I would have hoped for 4:12 to come about at 2:30 but that's just me. I've nothing against long pieces but it was a bit repetitious. But all in all a great mix and interesting.

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    Re:Song for you to hear... feeback wanted 2011/02/23 22:28:24 (permalink)
    It is a bit long, but being long and repetitious works good for movie credits.

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    Re:Song for you to hear... feeback wanted 2011/02/24 09:08:37 (permalink)
    Thanks for your feedback.

    A lot of the music that I listen to and write are more atmospheric.  Clearly that influence is in this song.  One reason for the length of this track is because I wanted to get a good amount of dialogue from the film in there... Not much that I do is radio friendly. 

    Thanks again for your input!  It is always nice to hear the opinions of other musicians.

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