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Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link !

It's long and wordy and kind of clunky but other than that .... hope you like it :)
Oops, link, thank you, dcumpian
- https://soundcloud.com/la...t-march2016-landr-high
 
New link to LandR medium intensity version:
https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445/stinky-big-cheese-that-isnt-right-march2016-landr-medium
post edited by skinnybones lampshade - 2016/03/25 15:34:05
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song 2016/03/24 08:41:55 (permalink)
No link?
 
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/24 13:02:56 (permalink)
Oops, link now added to first post - sorry!
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/24 15:21:00 (permalink)
Well, it's rather brilliant in a decadent but charming smokey cabaret-in-a-looneybin kind of way. The singing is fantastic, the playing is quite accomplished and the lyrics are intriguing, funny, sardonic and utterly confusing. Great accompaniment. For a ten minute rambling, jumpy opus, it's strangely compelling with a curiously obvious logic to it, and I found myself committed for the duration, patiently waiting nearly two minutes at a pop for the chorus to come around again so that I could stomp my foot while chanting, "Stinky big cheese."  A completely unique sound and experience for me, very nicely done. Sigh. I know Kurt Vonnegut or Joseph Heller would know exactly what to say about this song.
 
Oh, and the mix is pretty great as well.
 
Thank you for this!

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/24 19:11:21 (permalink)
Holy smokes, Kevin, what a nice thing to say! I'm beaming here. (Say, if I ever do an album, how do you feel about writing the liner notes? )
 
To tell you the truth, I was kind of nervous about posting this admittedly, ahem, unusual song, so getting such a nice review comes as a big relief.
 
It means even more knowing that it comes from such a talented man. Thanks again,
LJ
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/25 12:55:25 (permalink)
LJ, I wouldn't worry too much about posting whatever you'd like feedback on. Someone somewhere will generally give it a listen and provide some feedback. Sure, the more esoteric the material, the fewer comments one gets, but that's the nature of esoterica, I guess.
 
As far as the song goes, I would doubt its commercial viability, but as a piece of art, it certainly had an impact on me, and I suspect that's what you're after. This would make a great piece of performance art, I think. You have a certain something that's great to listen to, which does make a case for creating more "approachable" songs to broaden your appeal, but I'd also be quite proud to have something like this in my catalog. I look forward to hearing more!
 
 

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/25 13:30:21 (permalink) ☄ Helpfulby kevinwal 2016/03/25 15:14:38
I love this song.  Who hasn't wanted to write a tribute to their employers at some time or another ;) ?  That being said, I've been waiting to hear a song mastered by LANDR, and I think this is the weak point of the song.  It sounds a tad overcompressed and bright to my ears, and I would like to hear this song breathe a bit more.  But, that's a minor nit; it doesn't take away from the coolness of this recording.  Maybe try the medium setting in LANDR?

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/25 15:21:39 (permalink)
Thank you so much for those kind words, Lynn. I took your advice and tried the medium setting on LandR and here is the result:
https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445/stinky-big-cheese-that-isnt-right-march2016-landr-medium
 
I think it sounds more natural and want to thank you for taking the time to help me out like that. It's much appreciated!
Regards,
LJ
 
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/26 14:44:59 (permalink)
Awesomely weird and wonderful tune! Love the vocal and your guitar playing, too!

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/26 17:58:10 (permalink)
That was just strange enough for me.
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/26 18:30:39 (permalink)
Thanks very much, geeare1. That's very encouraging and kind of you to say. It's an odd feeling, putting these things out and kind of hoping yet kind of dreading that someone will actually listen :)  ... and bapu, I'll take that as a compliment from you, too, if I may
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/28 14:58:17 (permalink)
geeare1 mentioned "weird and wonderful", and yup, I'd agree.  
 
I'm not sure whether there's a genre or category where this would actually fit, but honestly I don't think it matters.   It has enough familiarity to make it work even with the offbeat instrument/sound choices, which BTW actually blend nicely.  I think that's also down to the arrangement and mix that seem to be custom tailored for the job.   Great space around everything.  And the build-up of weird sounds just adds another layer to the sunny straight-jacket feel, just in time to drop off at the end.    And the lyrics...  are a trip.   
 

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/28 17:55:41 (permalink)
Watch it, LJ, you might have a cult following before you know it.

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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/29 15:08:40 (permalink)
Ha ha, kevin, stop it, I love it! That'd be the day for sure!
 
stevec , what a kind and funny analysis!
 
You have a really entertaining way with words and very generous and kind opinions. Thanks very very much, it means a lot to me 
 
LJ
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/31 18:42:16 (permalink)
Hi Laura  , 
I've been trying to get over here for days …
I heard the first version the night you posted it and I think your second version w the Med setting works much better. 
I've actually listened to your song about 4 or 5 different times and I'm happy that today I didn't have to fight the clock to squeze a post in .
I'm one of these type of people that does not do a wham bam that was a "nice tune"  post in a thread .
Also I enjoyed your song the most today  I had made the time to listen it with out any distractions .
I like to try to get in the artist's head and heart to try to hear a song from the artists point of view before I come to my own conclusions … 
Well,  I feel you are a very unique and creative person  There is something about you and your music that draws me in …
It could be a combination of things …your voice , the easy going way you play the guitar . It may be the off beat way you come up with lyrics that offer a different slant or perspective on a story …
All I know is every time I  hear you voice it has a calming effect on me …
At this point I'm not even gonna try to figure it all out …I did dig your song a lot ..ruff places and all .
 
I'm happy you have decided to start posting here on this section of the forum …
I think you show a lot of potential and I feel you bring a lot to the table …
 
The only other thing I have to say is I hope I don't have to arm wrestle with Kevin to become a member of the cult 
 
You go girl ! I'm a fan …
 
all the best ,
 
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/31 18:54:58 (permalink)
That's what the king said (the big cheese) to mozart...it's too queer.  If your goal is entertainment rather then *esoterica* you've superceded most here.  For me, the highest compliment from someone is *it's entertaining*.  And this is entertaining. :D
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/31 20:25:06 (permalink)
geeare1
Awesomely weird and wonderful tune! Love the vocal and your guitar playing, too!


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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/03/31 21:02:09 (permalink)
Oh my goodness ... I can't get over how kind people here are.
 
Kenny, I listen to your playing over and over and value your opinion very highly. It means an awful lot to me. I hope you caught my comment on your latest offering - you're such a pleasure to listen to!
 
eph221, that is a wonderful compliment that I will treasure. Thanks for your kind and funny words (Yes, I guess the king would  be the big cheese) :)
 
String Jammer, thanks to you for chiming in with your encouragement. It all truly makes a difference.
 
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Re: Stinky Big Cheese (That Isn't Right) - original song - Now with link ! 2016/04/01 01:25:55 (permalink)
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Hi Laura  , 
I've been trying to get over here for days …
I heard the first version the night you posted it and I think your second version w the Med setting works much better. 
I've actually listened to your song about 4 or 5 different times and I'm happy that today I didn't have to fight the clock to squeze a post in .
I'm one of these type of people that does not do a wham bam that was a "nice tune"  post in a thread .
Also I enjoyed your song the most today  I had made the time to listen it with out any distractions .
I like to try to get in the artist's head and heart to try to hear a song from the artists point of view before I come to my own conclusions … 
Well,  I feel you are a very unique and creative person  There is something about you and your music that draws me in …
It could be a combination of things …your voice , the easy going way you play the guitar . It may be the off beat way you come up with lyrics that offer a different slant or perspective on a story …
All I know is every time I  hear you voice it has a calming effect on me …
At this point I'm not even gonna try to figure it all out …I did dig your song a lot ..ruff places and all .
 
I'm happy you have decided to start posting here on this section of the forum …
I think you show a lot of potential and I feel you bring a lot to the table …
 
The only other thing I have to say is I hope I don't have to arm wrestle with Kevin to become a member of the cult 
 
You go girl ! I'm a fan …
 
all the best ,
 
Kenny




Sorry, Kenny, I got here first. We do need a VP, however. Don't feel bad, it comes with a hat.

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