RE: String Trio demo
2006/01/15 14:44:08
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I think the tempo changes, especially ritardandi with pause then change of material, create the sense of disjointedness. Otherwise all the material is very tightly 'jointed', maybe even too little variation in the thematic basis. So, both too much and too little change -- how's that for criticism! Otherwise, it's attractive and fits the mezzo-piano pastel title "pastorale march". I'd re-visit the first 15 seconds and try to distinguish the voices better -- what is the viola doing exactly, and why? Is the 'cello part interesting enough? Can there be rhythm rather than just pulse? Would double stops with rests here and there be better than arpeggios?
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