Stuck in My Head

Stuck in My Head

https://soundcloud.com/orygun/stuck-in-my-head

This was inspired by one of Jesse Screed's songs.  I forgot the name of Jesse's song, but I believe it had a number in the title.  :-)

Memories are made of this.
A memory is nothing more than  a formation of neurons with a specific pattern to them, and they reside within a definite location in your brain.  So all those really BAD  memories in your head? Don't you wish you could just get in there among the offending neurons, zap 'em dead with a laser and never be bothered by those thoughts again?  Yeah, me too.

NI Sunburst
AD drums
Indiginus Renegade

Thanks for listening


Stuck in my Head  

Well, that woman she done me wrong
Yeah, that woman she done me wrong  so wrong

Stuck in my head what she done to me
Won't go away all the misery

If she weren't in my head  the pain would be gone
I'd be happy again  I could carry on    

Drinking away her memory
Puts an end to the misery

But in the morning  it's back at my door
The pain returns even more than before

If she ain't in my head the pain would be gone
I'd be happy again I could carry on   

Can I get a  system restore
Back to the way I  was before  

Somebody hit that Reset key
So she ain't there  in my memory

If she  ain't in my head the pain would be gone
I'd be happy again I could carry on

Hey can i get some neuro surgery  
Poke inside my head in the circuitry

Remove the misery, that's what I need
Slice and dice away her memory

If she ain't in my head it never took place   
I'd be back where I was with a smile on my face

Nice one Bjorn. I like the way you write your lyrics and they tell the story well. As Steve says that guitar sounds very convincing.

Steve
Thanks. I really like NI Sunburst and I find myself using it more and more. I don't play guitar very well
so it's great to have all those virtual instruments out there. Like I've said before, I have a bit of
an inferiority complex posting here among all the excellent guitar and keyboard players and singers. Only way for
me to express my music is via technology. Yeah, I know I should practice, but I'm getting on in years and I'd rather
spend the time making music vs endless playing of scales.


Adrian and Leadfoot
Thanks. I appreciate your comments.

I like the laid back approach to most of your songs. It suits your nearly whispered vocals and somehow works for you.
 
Every time I hear a song with this kind of lyrical content it reminds me of a great old country song by Webb Pierce called "There Stands the Glass". (This is David Ball singing it, and he's also a really good songwriter.)
 
Bill

Bill and Beagle
Thanks for listening. That laid back style is pretty much how I am all the time, the outside me anyway.  There could be a plane crash next door and my response to that would likely sound as if I'm talking about the grocery list.  I really do need an Emotion plug-in.

I'm always reminded of Leonard Cohen when I hear your songs Bjorn - a good thing in my book.
I would love to hear a simple bass riff in this one. Low end is a bit lacking.

Other than a bass line, for me this song has a classic feel.  Props for being able to successfully use "that women done me wrong" - it sounds right and doesn't come across at all cliche.   I'd say your focus on the song rather than the technique is working.  

you are one of the freest dudes i have ever heard
 
so real
 
bust out rosie!!
 
i hope i get to meet you sometime

Good song and lyrics.. A simple arrangement but it works well. Nice vocals and sounds