RE: Talk about creepy (New Song)
2009/01/04 09:17:08
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Hmm.
Nice little thing you have here, but i would say you need to rearrange it and maybe even "kill you darlings". Or make it double the length.
You use too many different drum loops that sorta "pops in and out". Choose one, and let it carry the whole song. Or at least make each part longer. 16 or 32 beats, not 4 :). As it is now, i find it "vulgar in the wrong way" when it hits me 0:20-0:30. I hope i make myself understandable:).
the 0:52 "sound effect" is a bad choice, as the one at 1.15.
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The good thing is that u have cought a really good ground to build on, the scary voice and deep sounds. I am not much into electronic experiments (have done just a few pieces), but if i were you, i would play more with the quietness, make it longer and build it up.
Anyway... again:
Nice little thing you have here! I enjoyed it.
cheers
/Bengt
Sweden