The Clubbers Tonic (Asaitic-Tunes)

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Boomin36Beatz
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2012/06/14 02:11:14 (permalink)

The Clubbers Tonic (Asaitic-Tunes)

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    Lynn
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    Re:The Clubbers Tonic (Asaitic-Tunes) 2012/06/14 10:32:16 (permalink)
    This is short and sweet.  You are putting out some beats that could be the basis of a killer song.  All I can say is:  don't stop there.  I hope to hear this song grow over time as you come up with a new section or two.  As it is now, I wouldn't even have time to work up a sweat if I were dancing to it.

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    Re:The Clubbers Tonic (Asaitic-Tunes) 2012/06/14 12:28:15 (permalink)
    You need a hook. The lead synth you used could be it if you choose one or two bars of it and then just brought that in every now and then. As a "lead" its otherwise too unfocused. A good start, but more to go.

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