The Fallout Mix

Eerie and provocative.  This sounds more like part of a soundtrack that an individual song, but it's cool anyway.  The mix is subtle and doesn't get in the way.  Nicely done, Wookie.

I agree that it does sound like a soundtrack..which is not a bad thing.Very haunting without being creepy if that makes sense.

Really like the way this turned out! Great job guys!
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thank you R, Monty, and Dan glad you enjoyed.
 
Robbie I will pass your observations on to the mix engineer and the vocalist. 

Thanks Reece appreciate you dropping by and listening and commenting.

what a cool slinky groove
 
kinda like if you married genesis with floyd
 
agree with the comments on the vox...
i like the IDEA of the effects, and understand the desired end results..but this particular mix isn't working as is.
 
it's just an FX choice on the mix....
 
possibly having a dry track mixed underneath the effected track,
or put the  dry track centered, and throw the effects hard left and right, to allow clarity on the vocal.
 
it's a cool tune

Hi Wookster,
  I do like the movement on this piece. Overall I think it works. Just need to clear the vox as mentioned up there above me. I feel that the vox sound a trifle too small and narrow. Wizard synth patterns though.
I also like Robbie grading the efforts :)

As the vocalist and lyricist on After the Rain, I would like to thank everyone for their comments. The problem Wookiee has is that I can't sing and so he has to conjure up a lot of electronic wizardry to make my vocals presentable. We, Wookiee and I, have recorded a fair number of tracks (some can be found on reverbnation and soundcloud) and as each song is different he has a new challenge on the vocals front. Overall he does brilliantly and I know he takes into account what you guys say so between you all and Wookiee I say again, thanks for the comments as they continue to make us better and push us (mainly Wookiee) onwards.

yea I really enjoyed this tune...I love collabs as they really bring tunes to the next level (in my mind)...and this is no exception.
 
very nice work!

Ha, I think Rob (Batsbrew) nailed it.  I was thinking Floyd but heard much more.  Genesis fits in.  I REALLY like this tune.  When that "after the rain" comes in it is so cool.  Loved it, John!

Warren thanks for your kind words I appreciate it and I know Ted will too.
 
Hi Robert many thanks for spending some time to lend your ears to this and make a comment.

That's exactly what I was gonna say! Man, sometimes when you listen to music that isn't meant to be commercial or for the radio, is what I mean by that, you hear some really interesting stuff. I love the fact that you can create anything and engage the creativity of the mind.
 
This would be on my playlist....just so that people could ask me - "What's that?!"