The Feast

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2013/03/23 18:37:34 (permalink)

The Feast

Hey everyone
 
This is my latest track, it's called "The Feast." I hope you enjoy it.
 
http://soundcloud.com/user9603240/ali-price-the-feast
 
Thanks for listening, and I would really love to hear any comments or criticisms that you might have.
 
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    foxwolfen
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/23 20:41:44 (permalink)
    Nice, enjoyed that.

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    logan86
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/23 20:59:42 (permalink)
    YAY thank you :)
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/23 22:04:50 (permalink)
    Ali, that's not the kind of music I normally listen to - but man was that entertaining - very cool.

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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/23 22:19:41 (permalink)
    Thank you so much CLEAN! I'm really glad you liked it :)
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/25 06:01:40 (permalink)
    Just updated the audio file on Soundcloud. Basically exactly the same but I've improved the mix a little bit and tried to make it a bit more punchy.
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/25 17:05:42 (permalink)
    Took me back to the early 90's wwhen i was listening to the house music that was coming out of new york at the time.
     
     I rarely listen to this style of electronica these days, and despite it sounding a little cliche at times,  i enjoyed the nostalgic feeling it gave me.


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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/26 16:29:17 (permalink)
    Thanks blipp, that's exactly the kind of feeling and the kind of era I was hoping to invoke, so obviously something has gone well :)
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/26 16:35:47 (permalink)
    I like this one.  As it went on I thought it got a little , well, redundant?  It sounds really good but for me, it needs some more "thingys" or a lead instrument to break it up.  Nice job!

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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/26 18:32:05 (permalink)
    I listened to that all the way through. It was really cool - it reminds me of Romanian House which is really big in the Mediterranean at the minute.
     
    I think its an accessible sound you have that can kind of appeal to a wider audience than the average club track. I'd listen to it again quite happily.
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/27 13:03:46 (permalink)
    @evadianepug, To be honest I did actually play around with adding more lead sounds etc, but everything just took something away from the original catchy idea. So I thought that considering I usually just overcomplicate things by adding too many different sounds and harmonies, I should instead just keep it stripped back and focus on the original catchy bass line idea instead. And it's not often enough that I come up with a hook which is actually simple and catchy enough to carry the whole track on its own, so I just didn't want to ruin that. @greekmac7, Thanks so much. I was really hoping to appeal to a wider audience with this in exactly the same was as you said. It's kind of a club track that hopefully anyone can enjoy. I'm really glad that you liked it :)
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/28 13:45:23 (permalink)
    Sounds good and punchy Ali, bet it would go down a storm in a club.

     
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/29 06:54:29 (permalink)
    The mix was great. Instruments sounded great. Liked the girl's voice. A bit redundant, though. Needs more variety, IMO.

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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/29 13:31:10 (permalink)
    @jamesg1213, Thank you :) @chasmcg, Thanks for your advice. Like I said I did actually try adding more instruments and even a lead, but to be honest everything just made it sound more cluttered, and it all took something away from the original idea. So in the end I just decided to keep it quite minimal. Normally I make my tracks too fussy anyway, so I didn't want to ruin this one with too many different sounds.
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/29 15:56:55 (permalink)
    Sounds like it would work well in the right environment but it does get a bit similar just some gloss and ear candy would make a big difference.  That long voice could do with a little sweep and some LFO speed variation, just the opinion of a furry eared alien.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/30 16:00:35 (permalink)
    Hey Wookie, thanks for your feedback. Hopefully I'll blow you away with the next one.
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    Re:The Feast 2013/03/31 13:58:31 (permalink)
    Creative use of effects. Not my genre, but it seems to work fine. I would have gone a bit easier on the reverb on the vocals in spots. Mix is good.

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    Re:The Feast 2013/04/01 20:12:07 (permalink)
    Ali, Nice start for a bigger thing. Seems to need a bit more happening in it and is a bit, well repetitious to a degree. I'm sure you know what your looking for and maybe this is it. It isn't my genre, so I can only give my opinion, not that its worth anything. Nice clean sound work though. Play around with a few other instrumentation samples and see what you come up with.

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