The abduction - My latest track created in Sonar X1 Expanded.

This was my entry for last month KVR cafe contest. Thought I would share it here for some feedback . The track was made in Sonar X1 Expanded. Will appreciate your thoughts and views.  http://soundcloud.com/satyatunes/the-abduction Direct download link:  http://soundcloud.com/satyatunes/the-abduction/download  The theme for the KVR Cafe July contest was a picture taken in 1958/59. Yes, the one that you see in the track picture above. Now imagine the scene after, the scene after she takes her hand off of her eyes. What does she see? futuristic warships, strange looking objects flying, strange looking creatures everywhere. Humans being tortured, killed and taken as prisoners. Who are these people? Aliens? Oh, they have invaded us? Are they trying to take over our beloved planet? Too many questions crops up in her mind, just as she tries to get a grip on herself. she sees her son, aliens trying to capture him. Poor little boy fighting to get away from them. She cries out for help. She runs towards them, fights with them with all her strength, tries to rescue her son but it's hopeless. They are powerful, she cannot do anything. They throws her out of the ship and takes her son with them. Just as the ship disappears into the sky, she lies there helplessly, tears running from her eyes. The memories flashes back in her mind. The beautiful memories of her son playing.  Tools:  DAW: Sonar X1 Expanded  Effects: Studioverb, Limiter No6, AriesVerb, ProChannel EQ and Compressor on most of the tracks, NastyDLA  Instruments: Dimension Pro, Sonik Synth 2, Free Soundfonts

I would be making chit up if I tried to crit this. I think its brilliant. I dunno how you made it, don't care. I may hire you when I make the movie for TOMM

What Foxwolfen said!!