Three songs

Any feedback on these mixes or songs would be appreciated. I have about one year of Cakewalk GTP 3 under my belt. I think I mixed the bass low on these because it always comes out too loud.

Please critique: Islamabad, Wise, or Situations Change


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/jeffreysykesmusic.htm

Any feedback can be sent to jeffreyhsykes@gmail.com

Thanks.

Mr. Sykes,

I listened to the songs. I want to be honest about them. Islamabad & Situations Change need a lot of work. I think that you are a little too close to these songs. Step back and listen. You already said why there is not much bass, but this is something that you will need to tackle in the mixes until you get it right. Maybe they are not my cup of tea. Seem a little busy and blurred.

Wise on the other hand, I liked. Better mix. You might want to use it as a template mix for the other two. Wise still needs work but I think you are heading in the right direction with this one.

-Ed Summers