Tomorrow Beatlesish

This song was made to a Beatles festival and I chose to describe the life for the fab fours the time after their last live concert on Candlestick Park. I figure that they would play this for journalists after a few months hence the small crowd. My friend Jan sounds more like John than me so he sings the lead. 
This was very fun to do All comments are good comments.


https://soundcloud.com/egon1/tomorrow


Lyrics:



Talk about the things that we will do tomorrow
Isn't really what I'm here to do
Instead of being buried in tons of sorrows
We gotta get, out of this road
 
George want to go to India so he can practice on a sitar
Paul will go to Kenya to look at elephants from a car
I will take part in a movie in Spain
 
The life on stage was intolerable We didn't hear our thoughts
The crowds scream was horrible We couldn't hear our self


Everybody's talking about reunion
And no one really know what to do
I do not say it's a funeral
But no one’s plan to put up a show
 
Ringo went home to the country side and do occasionally calls
My better half Yoko and I looking for a house in New York
Never mind Paul at all he's left-handed you know
 
Candle Stick Park was the end of the road
The long and winding road
Paul said to me we should do something White
I told him we better Let It Be

What a clever tune... very, very cool production...  
I love everything about this, except the lead guitar solo, which could use some cleaning up... that said, I think it's outstanding...

well done guys. Nice homage to THE 4....
Really has the vibe. 
I think the guit solo needs a little work though.

Real good nick of the Beatles' post Candlestick sound. You've got that droning mellotron and Ringo's drum style & sound. The vocal even has some of John's dreamy quality.

Pretty cool, I would say.

Cheers,

Bert

Very clever and creative eko. What a great tribute.

Love it!!! I agree with Shad: make the vocal a little more mid-rangy for authenticity. I'd also suggest some heavy compression on the drum overheads and perhaps a transient shaper on the bass for a more McCartney-esque mellow thump.

Wow! What a response we are overwhelmed here in Sweden. All your good thoughts I take with me to the final mix and all your greetings go directly to our hearts. Thank you all :-)

You are a rock Lynn I still have one to go for the album eleven from 2011 I hope that one wont be a flop.

Really good job.

Peace Ben

Now that was out of the box original. Very cool!  I'm with Shad I also hear a bit of Weezer.  KUDOS!


Kev

Weezer is a fun and creative band with a somewhat retro song style yet a modern sound. My comparison to them was of that aspect, and not that you sound like them. Just wanted to make that clear. This is a very original song.