e0nic
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[TracK] Just Die
All done in P5... let me know what ya think good or bad all comments appreciated.. ---[JusT Die]---
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/13 08:45:34
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I will check it out when i get home tomorrow...  looking forward to it.... 
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badbib
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/13 12:01:21
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That's a nice track!
I'd have liked to hear a piano in the first part... to compliments the nice synths/padz..
ooh there it comes!
haha, the piano is really making the track sound beautiful...
Man, that track is really good!!!
Gratz!
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e0nic
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/13 15:36:50
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thanx for the listen badbib im trying not to use the piano so much because i use it alot in all my songs so i wanted to try a less piano heavy number and see what i could come up with...again thank you for the listen...
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/13 16:04:28
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I'll listen when I get home from work. You are still going to enter my contest right? Can't wait to hear your entry.
post edited by triscuit - 2006/06/13 16:14:25
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triscuit
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/14 02:12:41
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Nice one man. Sounds really good. Love that little voice sample. Almost sounds like you need a style of your own though.........and crazier drums. Also you might want to work on writing a song.......as in verse chorus or different more complex themes. It's a nice soundscape though. Otherwise sounded great. How did you get it so clear. Maybe it's the whole industrial thing. 
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/14 17:34:43
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I like what you did with the drums when it gets distorted in the background. its a nice piece. when i first read the title..I though some hardcore industrial ws going to break my speakers...then this nice simple gentle, but dark songs started to play... I like it. the drums are a little to up front i think...maybe adjust the hi hats and snare a bit back.(not that i should say anything about that...as i do it quite offten too... ) nice one...
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/14 17:42:05
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This is very nice. Good minimilist idm i'd say. It reminded me of proem in some parts. Nice melodic parts and good choice of sounds. Enjoyed this one a lot.
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e0nic
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/15 01:44:19
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How did you get it so clear I got a few tips from a pro... I like it. the drums are a little to up front i think...maybe adjust the hi hats and snare a bit back.(not that i should say anything about that...as i do it quite offten too...) i went back and listened to the song and noticed that they were a bit too hot... why did i not hear that??? i dont know... Good minimilist idm i'd say any ideas on how i can improve from being a minimalist kinda sounds bad... and its always good to see that the robot community likes my minimal work...and thanx again for the listen and the input guys much appreciated..
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/15 03:39:39
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I like this track a lot. I think the textures work well with the melody. One thing I'd like to hear is more dropping in and out of individual drum parts before and leading our of the main break. Nice job man, keep it up.
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e0nic
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/15 16:09:12
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thanx for listen GC glad you liked it
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/15 16:27:39
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e0nic wrote: any ideas on how i can improve from being a minimalist kinda sounds bad... Nothing wrong or bad at all with being minimilist.
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Fred S
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/16 01:55:02
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Very nice theme/feel. I like the drums getting a little wilder after 3:00.
As others said, the snare and hats might be a littel too out front.
Nice work!
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/17 00:30:27
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nice chill piece. I agree that the drums are too much out front and that all of the synth voices could be brought up. The bass part sounds like it could drive the piece nicely but it was hard to hear. It might be competing for the same frequency space as the kick.
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e0nic
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/18 03:56:03
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thanx for the listen ecam glad to see an elite like yourself will listen to my stuff... comments from the pros are a HUGE help
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/18 14:51:15
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Very nice and gritty I could imagine this music in the low background as movies like The Matrix, etc. Very good job here!!!
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/18 19:20:27
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To think, at one time P5 was a $429 MSRP app. I think that technology and music has always been together, and I think music is science, anyway. - Vangelis The Other P5 Forum
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e0nic
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RE: [TracK] Just Die
2006/06/18 20:39:28
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oooooo, the matrix i like where your heads at thanx for the comments and the listen guys much appreciated
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