Re:[Track] Judgment Day
2009/09/04 00:12:14
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I found this one interesting. I could understand most of the lyrics w/o listening hard and thought the distortion worked ok - it is one of those on all or just a little effect. I also liked the build up, tho the first vocal/piano section(s) were too long - or too many. And I really liked the the beat section. It worked well. I'd cut one of the "intro" sections - I think we got the message the first time. Double the beat section and maybe try some vox or lead in the new 2nd beat section and then come down for the outro.
My other question is the sound is very dark - little high end. Maybe some cymbol splash or some other high frequency info would widen the canvas you are working on. But maybe you nailed the sound you wanted for the song. It works well with the distortion vox, but some clear high-end might make the song feel less constricted.
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