Trance Jam (intro shortened 12-25)

After weeks I have my daw computer back in business after wiping the hard disk from a nasty virus. To celebrate, I was toying with this music, and thought I would share.
Comment if you want, or not. Happy Holidays to all.
It's called "Trance Jam"
 
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10026449

Janet,
       Thanks for taking the time out to post a reply.
I hope this season finds you and your family doing well.
 
Thank you!
Bruce

notnat


I almost gave up on this before it really started... that would have been a shame... because this turned into a really groovy tune... Hot licks and great tone with a groove...

I would shorten the cheesy synth intro, before anyone else makes the same mistake that I almost did...

Very cool... well done...

Frank,
       Thanks for taking your time to type a post on this.
 I agree about the begining being to long before it gets to the meat.
I also thank you for the comment on the guitar tone, which I have been working hard to try to get a good tone.
I hope I can take this groove and further it into more of a song structure.
 
Thanks again, and Happy Holidays to you!
 

rockinrobby


Wow, this is not what I expected from you "at all." Not really my style the way it started, I really liked it when those guitars kicked in though! Beautiful recording/mix (IMO). Good job, and Merry Christmas :-) That guitar sounds great! Is it a Les Paul?

Robby,
          First off, thanks for taking the time to post on this.
          This is not what I would expect from me either, but with all the tool in 
          Sonar, I get adventurous.
        
          I have really been working on my guitar tone, and have found, what records well is not what  
          I would choose at all playing live. Also I have always loved that honk tone that only a Les Paul
          will deliver. (hehe)
 
          Thanks Robby!
          Happy Holidays

Slow Marching Band


Not what I expected from a 'trance' tune and I was pleasantly surprised when the guitars kicked in!!! (I almost made the same 'mistake' that Frank did too).

Excellent git tone/playing and you just drove this tune along nicely IMO!

Almost Floyd-ish.....

Larry

Thanks Larry,
          I took the advice that was given and have shortened up the intro.
I think the cheeze factor has been taken care of. LOL!
 
Thanks for taking the time to post.
 
Happy Holidays!

Nice one! A nice solid real drum track and a moving but not obtrusive bass part and this would be pretty smokin. Hmmm... Soundclick just stopped your song and started playing an ad. That was pretty obnoxious.

droddey


Nice one! A nice solid real drum track and a moving but not obtrusive bass part and this would be pretty smokin. Hmmm... Soundclick just stopped your song and started playing an ad. That was pretty obnoxious.

Dean,
Thank you for the listen and the post.
It is appreciated.
 
Thank you!
Happy Holidays!

philz


Cool tune definitely.  Loved the leads over the chords... cool stuff.  Fwiw- I kind of like mixing the electronic stuff with the classic gritty guitar sounds, so this was a treat for me.

Philz,
      Thanks for the kind comments.
Your post is appreciated. Here's wishing you a great new year.
 
Thank you!

very cool!

real nice guitar playing/tone.

nice groove and mix...

justjabbin


This is quite cool!!! Nice synth work and guitars.

Avery,
      Thanks for posting a comment. You have a very cool looking web site.
 
Hope you have a great New Year!

EddieZilker


I have to agree.  This is really quite good.  Love the synth work and the guitar is flawless.  Nicely done.

Eddie,
       Thank you for your kind comments, and taking the time to post.

ProjectM


Hah!

This is awesome!


Nicely done;)

Project M,
        Thank you for your nice comments.
I also want to thank you for rescuing me from page two. LOL

Thatsastrat

 

Project M,
        Thank you for your nice comments.
I also want to thank you for rescuing me from page two. LOL
 
Sure! No worries! Have no idea what you mean, tho...
 
Ha ha, sorry, but page two?

Thatsastrat

ProjectM

Thatsastrat

 

Project M,
        Thank you for your nice comments.
I also want to thank you for rescuing me from page two. LOL
 
Sure! No worries! Have no idea what you mean, tho...
 
Ha ha, sorry, but page two?

I had thought that this post had made it's way over to page two in the songs forum,
meaning not the first page you see, thats all.

A-ha! Get it ha ha, sorry, was a little slow there Yeah, that's cool. Keep it up front. Wow didn't know there were such a traffic here on the Songs forum that things fly down the pages. That's good I suppose. Wish I could post some proud moments here too.
 
Anyways, I'm looking forward to hear more of what you come up with. I'll definitely keep an ear close to the Songs Forum;)
 
Keep up the good work and stay off that page two!!!

vechung


Very nice combo of trace and rock.  This is a jam song; but I would suggest you add a bridge to change things up in the middle and go back to the original sequence.  This will add some length to the song which kind of short now.

Vechung,
          Yep! It was a jam. I will keep this though to see if I can
develop it more. Thanks for you comments.