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"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
quick demo. grungy, raw & kinda Ramones-ish high energy alt rock/punk. guitars tuned low to open C (C,G,C,G,C,E) http://soundcloud.com/abe...virus/under-the-ground UNDER THE GROUND (demo) © 2012 MRI Words & Music by Daren Thomas Turner -------------------------------------- welcome to one of those nightmares from some of those daydreams that come with bad timing help me dig a little further goin’ way past China and/or Long Island you have a very pretty face i’d love to stay here in your place hiding out from the human race, but i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) did you see a little movement? feel a vibration like a jackhammer? don’t fret that’s just a tunnel i’m a makin’ my wormhole for going deep under you have a very pretty face i’d love to stay here in your place hiding out from the human race, but i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) i’ll be under the ground (if you want me) heaven help the motivated --------------------------------------
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 11:42:08
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Son, you are pumping out tunes this weather! This had energy and simplicity, great track to play live. I like the way the vocal are tucked way back. "Ill be under the ground if you want me....." solo = que--->moshing! Cian
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 12:08:28
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A real rocking song. Tight rhythm, nice sounds ..
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 16:14:23
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Hi Daren, this certainly rocks. I used to play in open c on steelstring acoustic guitar, didn't sound like this though ; ) Rik
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 16:23:54
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Daren, you've done it again. This has your signature sound and so much raw energy that I just hooked my house up to it. This is one tune that I think the vocals belong in the background just a touch, and you nailed it. As always, your lyrics are great as is your guitar playing. We just need to get you on the cover of the Rolling Stone while there still is one.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 18:02:40
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Makke A real rocking song. Tight rhythm, nice sounds ..
hey thanks for the listen, bro! :)
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 18:06:02
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Rikkie Hi Daren, this certainly rocks. I used to play in open c on steelstring acoustic guitar, didn't sound like this though ; ) Rik LOL cool Rik. Yea i love that tuning & use it a lot, for slide too. i'll never be at your level of guitar mastery in this lifetime ;p thanks dude. & thanks for your musical inspiration as well.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 18:07:37
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Lynn Daren, you've done it again. This has your signature sound and so much raw energy that I just hooked my house up to it. This is one tune that I think the vocals belong in the background just a touch, and you nailed it. As always, your lyrics are great as is your guitar playing. We just need to get you on the cover of the Rolling Stone while there still is one. much appreciated, Lynn :) yeah i like the rawness about this track- it's more or less a simple tune too & is a lot of fun to play live, so i tried to capture that and not over-produce.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 18:11:01
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whack Son, you are pumping out tunes this weather! This had energy and simplicity, great track to play live. I like the way the vocal are tucked way back. "Ill be under the ground if you want me....." solo = que--->moshing! Cian awesome Clan. thanks. & exactly, as i said to Lynn, this was a fav to play live, so i tried to capture that energy in the studio. tucked the vox back a bit, esp in the 1st part of chorus, as even though i'm singing all the parts in this studio version, i tried to emulate Dan, Rob or Alan singing the chorus parts in a live performance to give it that stage dimensionality etc...
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 18:45:31
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I didn't want to... but I do anyway... love it ... like it a lot... love it a little... This would be fun to play, but I would never muster the energy...
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/22 23:01:14
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Man you're cranking them out! I got a little scared when I saw the picture of the .wav :-O It looked like a seismograph during a 12.0 earthquake? I’d say you nailed what you were going for.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/23 03:01:18
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Hey, Daren, Very cool post punk rocker with a ton of energy flowing throughout the mix! It sort of reminds me of a fusion of a modern version of the Ramones vibe, combined with Alice In Chains. Great stuff, nice work! Bob
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/23 15:39:14
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notnat I didn't want to... but I do anyway... love it ... like it a lot... love it a little... This would be fun to play, but I would never muster the energy... lol ;p thanks. yea it's a good cardio workout. great gatorade song
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/23 15:40:47
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The Band19 Man you're cranking them out! I got a little scared when I saw the picture of the .wav :-O It looked like a seismograph during a 12.0 earthquake? I’d say you nailed what you were going for. hahaaa ya it's compressed alright. but kinda fits the genre. it's not as scary when listening lol thanks :)
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/23 15:41:59
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Bob Oister Hey, Daren, Very cool post punk rocker with a ton of energy flowing throughout the mix! It sort of reminds me of a fusion of a modern version of the Ramones vibe, combined with Alice In Chains. Great stuff, nice work! Bob awesome. much appreciated, Bob! Ramones meets AIC. love it :-)
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/24 10:19:56
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Cool tune man! I also really like how you have the vocals mixed.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/24 11:44:01
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Let's see - everything but the kitchen sink - I know I heard a jackhammer in there *lol* NICE! As a lyricist, I got a real kick out of your lyrics too, on this! As others have noted, you have the perfect vocal style and slight background effect for this pumping rock style. A great job all the way around, very nicely done!! ~ John
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/24 18:50:43
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clintmartin Cool tune man! I also really like how you have the vocals mixed.
thanks Clint :) JD1813 Let's see - everything but the kitchen sink - I know I heard a jackhammer in there *lol* NICE! As a lyricist, I got a real kick out of your lyrics too, on this! As others have noted, you have the perfect vocal style and slight background effect for this pumping rock style. A great job all the way around, very nicely done!! ~ John awesome. thanks. ya friend of mine thought something was wrong with his laptop playing it in the background while working when he realized it was the jackhammer sample lol
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/24 22:58:21
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ABeautifulVirus The Band19 Man you're cranking them out! I got a little scared when I saw the picture of the .wav :-O It looked like a seismograph during a 12.0 earthquake? I’d say you nailed what you were going for. hahaaa ya it's compressed alright. but kinda fits the genre. it's not as scary when listening lol thanks :) It was actually quite good. You have the skills, to pay the bills... And seem to be able to do different styles as well? We'll never catch up to James Yoyo in terms of diversity? I've tried, trust me, "it's a losing battle..." I'm currently fighting hard for 2nd place. I consider myself to be one of the most perverse, I'm sorry, "diverse" artist's on the forum.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/25 21:37:20
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The Band19 ABeautifulVirus The Band19 Man you're cranking them out! I got a little scared when I saw the picture of the .wav :-O It looked like a seismograph during a 12.0 earthquake? I’d say you nailed what you were going for. hahaaa ya it's compressed alright. but kinda fits the genre. it's not as scary when listening lol thanks :) It was actually quite good. You have the skills, to pay the bills... And seem to be able to do different styles as well? We'll never catch up to James Yoyo in terms of diversity? I've tried, trust me, "it's a losing battle..." I'm currently fighting hard for 2nd place. I consider myself to be one of the most perverse, I'm sorry, "diverse" artist's on the forum. hey cool; thanks. yeah i dabble sometimes in other genres just to keep it interesting eg the Doors cover, but that is something i'd never attempt to play out w/ MRI of course lol. James is indeed quite the impressive showman both in technique and talent, and you have a studio/songwriting panache that is head and shoulders above many, so your comments mean quite a lot. i'm just here really to listen and learn, as for the latter, i have a lot to still absorb and apply. kinda learning/teaching myself by doing and observing other engineers over the years. spent a decade just writing songs and playing out, not doing much more than just plugging in, so i have a lot of catching up to do. my fav DAW setup is Logic/iZotope, so there is always something new to explore.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/26 14:00:53
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Yes, punk vibe it is. Good stuff - great guitar lead - slides right in. the vocals are a bit too good for most punk stuff (and the lyrics). You doubled them like Joey, yes? They work and sound great - but better than most of the early punk singers. That ain't a criticism, just an observation. I wouldn't pump up the suck level just to be historically accurate. ;-) @
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/26 17:16:17
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AT Yes, punk vibe it is. Good stuff - great guitar lead - slides right in. the vocals are a bit too good for most punk stuff (and the lyrics). You doubled them like Joey, yes? They work and sound great - but better than most of the early punk singers. That ain't a criticism, just an observation. I wouldn't pump up the suck level just to be historically accurate. ;-) @
hahaa great point. thanks ;p - i would agree. yea i doubled all the vox & harmonies - way too much polish for punk lol John Lydon is laughing at this
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 05:29:59
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Dood, 2 weeks in and I'm loving everything you put out, come on give us an album.... :-) Great stuff, I love the hyper compressed sound.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 08:41:36
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Cracking grungy rocker, really liked that. Great hook too, that'll be running through my head all day!
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 09:42:32
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Love it! Great energy and executed perfectly.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 18:32:19
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Bro, this is cool as hell, & right up my alley personally. I think the vox maybe a hair too far back but that is really subjective. I like how you left the narly guitar noises in the intro/ending. It's got that gritty rock feel to it. Nice mix & Great hook.
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 20:17:17
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I totally liked everything about this. Really nice work, Daren. I have mixed feelings about this genre, liking about 50% of what I hear, but THIS TUNE is great!
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/27 20:52:10
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I'm way too old for this... but while it's playing I feel younger... Great energy, you have to like it! Daryl
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/28 21:40:02
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vechung Love it! Great energy and executed perfectly. hey thanks Vechung :) much appreciated!
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Re:"UNDER THE GROUND" {grungy, kinda Ramones-ish punk/alt-rock}
2012/08/28 21:46:11
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darylcrowley I'm way too old for this... but while it's playing I feel younger... Great energy, you have to like it! Daryl hahahaaa- NEVER too old to rockNroll ;p thanks Daryl!
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