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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 0:36 PM
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Like the music - can't wait to hear it with lyrics. Nice blend of elements and sounds. good groove, well produced. Love the sick and happy little organ bit tho all the happiness belies the song title. Maybe in the lyrics. All around interesting either way.
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james125
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 4:17 AM
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Like the music - can't wait to hear it with lyrics. Nice blend of elements and sounds. good groove, well produced. Love the sick and happy little organ bit tho all the happiness belies the song title. Maybe in the lyrics. All around interesting either way.
Hey thanks for the listen and heads up on this version , that little organ sort lelf you with that sound but it was really a volin not a organ .
I'm guessing the mix of the volin along with the other sounds in my mix made it sound like a small organ but thats cool as long as it ended up sounding good thats all that counts .
Thanks for the comments on the music , lyrics and vocals sometime next week .
Cheers!
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 11:12 AM
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Ah, violin. I will have to give it a listen again. Anyway, a nice touch.
Look forward to hearing the lyric version.
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 3:41 PM
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This is strange, in cool way. I can't even imagine lyics at this point, I look forward to seeing where you are going with this one. As usual I'm sure it will all come together very nicely.
Great tones as always.
Daryl
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james125
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 3:54 PM
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darylcrowley
This is strange, in cool way. I can't even imagine lyics at this point, I look forward to seeing where you are going with this one. As usual I'm sure it will all come together very nicely.
Great tones as always.
Daryl
Thanks for the listen Daryl , it started out at fist sounding like a dark movie piece of music , I didn't like where it was going so I started adding in different sounds to change the sound and feel of the music .
I was thinking the same thing toward the end thinking this sounds a bit strange but then again it sort of sounds cool in todays music , I grew up in the 60's and 70's and 80's when listening to music and now I'm trying to keep up with the new sounds that are out today now all I need is a body makeover ! LOL
Thanks again for the review on my newest tune , I think I have a title now and today I start on writing some lyrics .
Sometime late next week I hopefully will have lyrics and vocals with it .
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james125
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 4:05 PM
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Ah, violin. I will have to give it a listen again. Anyway, a nice touch.
Look forward to hearing the lyric version.
Yea the other sounds leave you with hey this sounds a bit like a organ sound but yell its a Violin instrument from CakeWalk .
If you listen to it without headphones on you can tell its a Violin but with headphones it sounds like an organ .
The lyrics I'm working on now , I think I have a title now to work with .
Should have the complete song with lyrics and vocals next week sometime .
Cheers!
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 4:11 PM
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Very cool composition, intensity with a futuristic theme. Nice arpeggios keeps it flowing nicely. Overall superb production. Very well done :)
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 20, 10 6:21 PM
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Very cool composition, intensity with a futuristic theme. Nice arpeggios keeps it flowing nicely. Overall superb production. Very well done :)
Thanks for the comments , nicely put sort of futuristic I like that didn't think of that way but yea it sort has that sound in a round-about-way thanks .
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 22, 10 1:57 PM
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The percussion on this really gives this a lot of punch/dynamics. This one stirs up visuals for me, so I tend to lean more towards some sort of score with this. The violins have a sort of R&B/Funk vibe to it and is a nice touch. Very well put together IMO!
Larry
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james125
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 22, 10 3:42 PM
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Slow Marching Band
The percussion on this really gives this a lot of punch/dynamics. This one stirs up visuals for me, so I tend to lean more towards some sort of score with this. The violins have a sort of R&B/Funk vibe to it and is a nice touch. Very well put together IMO!
Larry
Thanks Larry when I started overhauling the other piece of music I created SONG-X I called it that no one liked so I started with the drum track redoing it first then I deleted almost all of the other instrument tracks and started over again with something different and new . I was messing around with some Violin sounds and thought this is cool why not try this one out , sounded cool to me so I went with it . I have a title now its going to be renamed " I'M IN LOVE " , its going to be sort of a love song with a edge to it you might say . I'm working on some lyrics now , see what happens by the end of next week . Thanks for the listen and comments , cheers!
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 25, 10 4:39 AM
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very nice gothic-tinged sound, i could imagine Carl McCoy singing over this, the sound is very unique and very good. will wait with interest for the finished version!
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 25, 10 1:53 PM
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very nice gothic-tinged sound, i could imagine Carl McCoy singing over this, the sound is very unique and very good. will wait with interest for the finished version!
Thanks for the comments on the music , as for the song or lyrics that I just finished writing for this song things are not going great for me .
I say that because for a month I have been having alot of breathing issues , been in the hospital twice because of it this month and last month .
I tried singing the lyrics two days ago and I was having some real problems singing .
I do know some of the issues I was having had to do with some of the lyrics and I need to go back and do some rewriting to fix some of those problem areas but my vocals seems to be the real issue I'm dealing with .
I haven't sung anything in a long time so maybe I'm also out of practice , this project might be delayed for a few more weeks untill I can sort some of this out .
Not giving up on it but I need to figure out why I'm having these breathing problems I'm dealing with now .
Thanks for the interest and comments,cheers ! James
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 26, 10 12:44 AM
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Pretty intense piece and really like the way it rolls along like a troop marching to battle. Very interested to see what kind of lyrics is going to go with this.
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 26, 10 1:06 PM
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Hey James, really cool piece of music this. Very enjoyable to listen to for most part.
My only slight nit is it was a little repetitive. Would have been excellent if one of the verses changed completely to break it up.
Was still very, very good.
Mark.
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 26, 10 2:24 PM
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Hey James, really cool piece of music this. Very enjoyable to listen to for most part.
My only slight nit is it was a little repetitive. Would have been excellent if one of the verses changed completely to break it up.
Was still very, very good.
Mark.
Thanks Mark , you might have some good advice a change in one of the verses might give the music a lift .
I did that with one of my past songs called BLUE MIST where the second verse sounded different .
I'm still working on the lyrics for this one , I'm having to rewrite the lyrics again .
As for singing right now I'm dealing with some bad lung issues , I'm calling my doctor today so I can find out whats going on with my breathing .
Could be the season it happens to me every year , this one creeped up on me fast and hard .
I'm hoping I can get over this soon because I really wanted to add lyrics & vocals to this music I created .
Hey thanks again for the listen and the review.
Cheers! James
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Re:UNDERGROUND - A ELECTRONIC EDGE
May 26, 10 2:32 PM
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DuRod
Pretty intense piece and really like the way it rolls along like a troop marching to battle. Very interested to see what kind of lyrics is going to go with this.
Thanks , funny you mentioned that , it does sort has that feel to it
As for the lyrics it might be a few more weeks or so I'm having to rewrite them .
The lyrics I had written didn't work for me , some of the words I used didn't sound right so I'm starting all over again with something different.
Another issue I had was my vocals I had some real vocal problems because of my lung problems I'm dealing with now , I'm going to see a doctor this week or maybe today if I can get in .
Thanks for the listen , maybe I'll have something next month sometime I'm still working on it .
Cheers! James
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