Under Control

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2011/02/05 00:22:43 (permalink)

Under Control

I hope this is nearing completion. Tune has more guitar parts, vox and even some keys. I seek your help to accept this mix as being on a parallel with the other I posted, 'Stars' as they will be on a EP ( link to thread and song: )   http://forum.cakewalk.com/tm.aspx?m=2219381 
Thanks for listening - Shep 
  
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1870114/Under%20Control%20%20013011%20%2313%203%201.mp3 
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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/05 02:54:18 (permalink)

    I like the song , I think the song need to be remixed . Its not a bad song I just think it could sound better in my ears with the right mix between all your tracks recorded and then one final mix .

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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/05 08:56:24 (permalink)
    I respect your opinion. But you haven't said anything about what you consider wrong, you just want me to tear it all down and build it from the ground up. Can you please tell me what you consider so wrong?

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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/06 23:46:13 (permalink)
    In hopes of a few comparisons to the link above... Thanks alot, Shep

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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/06 23:49:22 (permalink)
    I think it sounds really good...nice vocals and mix to me.

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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/07 18:06:58 (permalink)
    Sounds about right for the style to me. Makes me think of the Amercian Pie movies  - would fit in the soundtrack to somthing like that quite easily.
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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/08 09:21:24 (permalink)
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    If I would do anything - it would be to NUDGE, just a NUDGE, very small NUDGE to the lead vox...
     
    Good song and sounding mix IMHO

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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/08 09:29:11 (permalink)
    It may be the headphones or the Mp3, but I had a hard time hearing the bass.  Again, bass could be present on a real speaker system.  I'm at work and only have cheap headphones.  Good job.  Like it. Vocals/Harmony's sound good.

    Edit - after pushing headphones to ear, the bass is there.  disregard.
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    Re:Under Control 2011/02/08 10:22:44 (permalink)
    Sound great the way it is.  Don't overproduce it.  Maybe add a guitar solo and that is it.

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