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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/26 10:48:49
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I'm not sure why you haven't had more response here on this one Sunny. I simply love the song and arrangement!
The violins are a bit artificial sounding, but it didn't break the song.In fact I think the violin really glues it all together.Maybe a plate with a short delay on the violin would add some life to it.
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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/26 11:54:29
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Beautiful vintage sound. Nice, balanced mix. A bit disturbing artificial violin in its solo moments. IMHO, a bit improper reverb on the vocals. Overall - great!
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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/26 20:57:40
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Yeah, great vintage sound. :) The choice of verb on the vox makes them sound 'watery' and like they are in danger of drowning. Like the gt work and solo. :)
Enjoyed this tune very much. Pretty good mix too.
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dcumpian
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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/27 08:46:41
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The only problem I have with the FX on the main vocal is that the vocal is mixed too low and the FX are too loud. Bring the vocal up, and make it a little bigger. Lower the FX so they are more subtle.
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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/27 16:04:53
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Lovely vocal arrangement. A little hard to hear the lead vocal. You might back off the delay, see if that brings it forward.
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Re: Vision of you
2014/07/31 14:17:28
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+1 to all of the above. Good tune with a cool vibe and a nice overall mix. A little more compression on the lead vocal (CA-2A would be nice for this) and a little less delay might wrap it up.
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munmun
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/05 19:51:07
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Thanks everyone. I dried out the vocals and added a touch of reverb to the faux strings. Hope this works better.
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/05 20:35:02
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I'm not familiar with this song. However, the changes you made must have worked because it all sounds good to me.
Nice one.
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/06 12:37:26
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Nice song and performance/arrangement. Sounds really good. Reminds me of George Harrison for some reason, I was waiting for a slide guitar at the end;) Anyway, really enjoyed this post.
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Lynn
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/06 13:19:42
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This is a unique and catchy pop tune. I agree with Mark that it reminds me of George Harrison. By the time I heard it, some of the kinks may have been ironed out because it sounds like a finished product to me. Well done!
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munmun
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/10 00:13:44
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Re: Vision of you
2014/08/10 08:54:56
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Well done. Sounds great. Enjoyed the listen.
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