Walkin Away

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2012/01/30 18:22:17 (permalink)

Walkin Away

New tune, would love feedback. Thanks Bobby
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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/30 20:50:33 (permalink)
    You all have a nice kick-ass sound.  The song has a lot of energy and drive.  The mix is punchy and balanced, although I would turn up the slide guitar a bit.  I believe that I said the same thing the other night regarding the three songs you posted.  If it's good, let's hear it.

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/30 22:01:29 (permalink)
    Thanks Lynn. Yeah, I gotta fix it. I noticed during mixdown that the start of the slide had a harmonic that I didn't like so I let the vocal ride into the solo. Good catch. I didn't get much response from my other post, and then realized that most people post just one song at a time, so thought that I'd do it that way, and have the tune just open rather than go to our website. Thanks again Lynn. Bobby 

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/30 22:03:55 (permalink)
    Lynn, I watched you video Rivers of the sky. Nice job....

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/30 22:13:08 (permalink)
    This is really cool bit of tunage.

    There is a guitar in the background that needs more volume. The lead needs more volume as well. The end seems a little abrupt. Maybe extend a clip a bit so the reverb tail continues.

    Other than that, very well performed and with the exception of the forementioned, a great mix.

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/30 23:02:57 (permalink)
    Good job.  Vocal in the verse needs more edge like the chorus.  She has good attitude but is not present enough.  Agree with Guitarpima that lead need more volume.  Love the riff.  

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/01/31 17:42:28 (permalink)
    Thanks for your input guys. Looks like a remix is in order. Thanks again. 

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/02 18:37:50 (permalink)
    Good song. I like the crunchy guitar tone and the singer has a good voice. You've already got the mixing suggestions.....


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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/02 19:19:06 (permalink)
    Thanks Ihansen

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/02 20:51:59 (permalink)
    Great sounding song. Nice job!

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/02 21:23:50 (permalink)
    Thanks Gary.

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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/04 22:27:10 (permalink)
    Great song!  Great performances.  She's got a great voice! 
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    Re:Walkin Away 2012/02/05 07:27:51 (permalink)
    Thanks Janet. Hopefully gonna work on the remix today.

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